Reviews for The End
ChocolateTeapot chapter 1 . 1/18/2012
Interesting story. However her name isn't Deidre, it's Deirdre.
Numbuh six-sixtysix chapter 1 . 4/9/2010
Ok, what the hell just happened here? I feel like I have just been given the climactic ending to a very long and involved novel. It's like the start of the Max Payne, it is dramatic, and fairly climactic, but we don't know why, because we have only just come on. Unfortunately, here, we don't then find out why the drama and climax. Although, now I must admit I feel kind of bad for clearing out the fungus fields in the game. At one point, I kept all of Planet fungus free for three entire turns. No wonder the Mind Worms got so antsy.
RMcD94 chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
Nice story, a shame games haven't become creative enough to allow something like this to actually occur. That'd be nice.
Black Lotus Flower chapter 1 . 7/29/2008
I liked the emotion and the description you put into it. Good job! Well written.