Reviews for Kage no Naruto
Guest chapter 76 . 9/12
sorry droped
Ur mom chapter 31 . 9/9
GOOD JOB everyone knows sasuke is gay
Ur mom chapter 28 . 9/9
Umm it is very unrealistic to think the abrume clan only has 30 members I know that they are not that likeable but it is one of the main clans because it has a seat in the counsel the the sarutobi are a clan with only 100 to 80 members and are a minor clan only clans with 200 members but if they have a blood line then the are a clan no matter what
Ur mom chapter 13 . 9/3
I Love naruto this story is so good your writer score in 9217493284615349463177641386481063946578134501346314out 1010(means 10 in binary) you have broken limits
Ur mom chapter 2 . 9/3
I love it
Ur mom chapter 1 . 9/2
Hiruzen is smoking a cigar
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13
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Ragno Rock chapter 1 . 4/16
shit this story is absolutely shit
Guest chapter 3 . 3/17
Ah yes...
Naruto, The God of *Rice Cakes*
tyrekebah53 chapter 15 . 3/16
Is naruto going to have haki
Guest chapter 8 . 3/12
The story is well written and it has decent pacing but you keep throwing random stuff in. That would be ok if not for how quickly and how often you do it. There seems to be very little actual planning for the direction of the story. It feels very rushed and unplanned. Still overall not a horrible story at all. It’s fairly decent but at least for me the randomness has proved to be too much. :/
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22
I dislike doing this or giving disapproval to writers that are at least trying but I can't read past chapter one, I personally like to read a serious story where humor is rare and romance is almost non-existent where death is normal and tragedy is right around the corner and where death leaks in the atmosphere. This story would have fit in that category if it were not for the fact that I know that you were trying to be funny with the 'Sarutobi Sasuke' thing and for that, I can tell many readers do not wish to continue reading the story now I'm not saying the story is bad and I am simply saying that humor in a story where Naruto is supposed to be 'Dark, Evil, Grey' Or even insane is a major turn off
and throws the 'Feel' of the story off after all our mind can only do so much to get a 'Feel' for the story and from the prologue, I expected a slightly maybe even insane Naruto rare moments of humor and maybe gore somewhere into the story well I can't really say that because I only read chapter '1' but still MAYOR turn-off.
BROCKLESNER chapter 1 . 1/20
Great Story. I Have Found The Story Again. I Love The Fact You Have Haku As A Girl Which Is Different Than Canon(In Canon Haku Is A Guy Although It Is Pretty Hard To Tell)! I Love That You Actually Are Making Changes To Canon Because Quite Few People Do NOT Seem To Get That Naruto Fanfics Are Written By Fans And Seem To Complain When Stuff Does Not Follow Canon! In Fact I Get Annoyed When I Read Crossover Stories Where A Main Character Is Replaced With A Crossover Character But Very Little If Anything At All Changes. Hopefully Naruto Stays Bad/Evil/Dark! I Hate/Have Been Getting Tired Of Reading Stories Where Naruto Is/Becomes "Bad/Evil/Dark" But Than By The End Of The Story Naruto Becomes Good Again.
Max chapter 1 . 1/18
Nice way to describe how stupid the third was.
Izub chapter 93 . 10/13/2021
It’s been 11 years so what ever happened to you hope your enjoying your life and thanks for the read
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