|Reviews for Temptation|
| NeverBeenMerelyPretty chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
This is amazing :D I love the last line :-) Great writing :D :D :D
| blank chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
strawberries... ha! luv it- plz write more!
| nepalipranshu chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Love the story and love the last line!
| abbyweyr chapter 1 . 11/14/2012
cute and funny especially the flour. And just how does he explain the strawberry smell?
| laughsmilex3 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
| jus2read chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Aaaaawwwwwww,, Swwweeeettt )))
Luv da finish :p
| letski chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
| patiicm chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
you should continue writing this story. The ending was like a to be continued... you know
Amazing just all your other stories
| Cit-Cat Mccoy chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
this was really sweet!
| JRFaab chapter 1 . 5/13/2010
I really liked it.
| bananafox chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
| Forgottobealover chapter 1 . 3/14/2010
I Loved it, really cute ! Though Edward did seem a bit, Proud i guess ? Just a bit OOC in the end from Edward sparty but otherwise fantastic !
| Sugargirl5 chapter 1 . 2/15/2010
Big grin at the last line :). I simply adore fluffy, romantic one-shots with a bit of curious and jealous Edward... which is exactly what this one was :).
| WithoutLove.LifeIsLike chapter 1 . 1/5/2010
Aw - cute Edward :)
| Un'Anima Persa chapter 1 . 11/21/2009
Edwards mistakes/clumsiness were really funny and the ending was so romantic! You did a exellent job with the story.