|Reviews for Temptation|
| simone levine chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
aww thats cute! its really in character and the writing is spectacular. i LOVE the ending-it has a really nice closure. :-)
| SleathyNinja chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
THAT WAS SWEET!
| The Real Blue Eyed Demon chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I really liked it. You come up with the best ideas.
| The Scribe of Stories chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
great.i just knew u were going to puit something about the shampoo in the end.
| MidnightxRed chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
i love reading your fanfics cause they seem to fit in with the characters personalities in Twilight
i hope you right more of them
| BlushingInsomniac chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
i wish i could write oneshots like this
it was really cute while still making me laugh
I loved the ending with strawberries
it was perfect
| twinerd chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
SO CUTE! I LOVE IT!
| JerseyBella chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
That was great, I really enjoyed it. Your writing is wonderful and I loved seeing Edward be a little clumsy for a change. Very well done.
| Swimbutterfly chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
O this was really sweet
| Trikky-Stikky chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
ok i have to say... that was a really funny account from edwards p.o.v
i was laughing heaps. please write aother one soom
| irishgirl32 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
this was a wonderfully written one shot!
| sah11679 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Aw! Very sweet story and even sweeter Edward. I love that man...I mean vampire. :)
| Ruby Red-ink chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
great story! very cute and funny. great job! i look forward to seeing more from u!
| Music.Junkie4 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Haha. Way to go, Edward. He was actually clumsy for once!
| Random Little Remus Lover chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
This was truely funny and adorable, I am going to email the contents to my best friend! I'm not sure if she would be able to find it on here!