Reviews for Temptation
amazeedayzee chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Last line: Genius.
jesslikescoffee chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
Very cute! I like it. Off to read your other stories..
simone levine chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
aww thats cute! its really in character and the writing is spectacular. i LOVE the ending-it has a really nice closure. :-)

SleathyNinja chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
The Real Blue Eyed Demon chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
I really liked it. You come up with the best ideas.
The Scribe of Stories chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
great.i just knew u were going to puit something about the shampoo in the end.
MidnightxRed chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
love it!

i love reading your fanfics cause they seem to fit in with the characters personalities in Twilight

i hope you right more of them
BlushingInsomniac chapter 1 . 7/4/2008

i wish i could write oneshots like this

it was really cute while still making me laugh

I loved the ending with strawberries

it was perfect
twinerd chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
JerseyBella chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
That was great, I really enjoyed it. Your writing is wonderful and I loved seeing Edward be a little clumsy for a change. Very well done.
Swimbutterfly chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
O this was really sweet
Trikky-Stikky chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
ok i have to say... that was a really funny account from edwards p.o.v

i was laughing heaps. please write aother one soom
irishgirl32 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
this was a wonderfully written one shot!
sah11679 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Aw! Very sweet story and even sweeter Edward. I love that man...I mean vampire. :)
Ruby Red-ink chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
great story! very cute and funny. great job! i look forward to seeing more from u!

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