|Reviews for Temptation|
| lemon-of-the-tent chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
M... I loved thinking of Edward in the shower... that was my favouite bit - the bit with the shampoo. Yay! I don't understand how Edward's aim could be off when he threw that towel, though. I didn't think Edward's aim was ever off... Also, I though there would be more mischeif and listening to thoughts of people in class. Hm. I loved it anyway!
| Lesliemac531 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Cute story. It was good.
| karina5185 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Man, that just made my day.
| TwoRubySlippers chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
another sweet one...
but hilarious too!
the showering, and the strawberries... and the "oh, right. yesterday" with the changing... hee
there was something else i cracked up at but i have forgotten it.
MY MIND IS A SIEVE!
there was somthing else i wanted to tell you, too...
oh, you never responded to my beta offer...
oh, the naked thing was what cracked me up! how funny!
keep going, ren!
hey, is that your real name?
is it renee? or renata? or lauren?
it could be anything!
| thefuturemrs.edwardcullen chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
A marvelous job on Edward's pov! A special thank you to Variety as well for an excellent beta job! I must admit, the thought of Edward "in the buff" had my pulse racing; that's a mental image I certainly enjoyed having. I think I just blushed a shade of scarlet Bella would admire. Thank you again for Edward's point of view! You must do another one soon!
| runaway xo chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
So sweet! I loved the part where Edward couldn't choose what shirt to wear! Unbelievably cute :)
| hot 101 chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
You did a WONFERFUL job with Edward's POV, so no worries!.And the one-shot it's self was just fabulous!.
| TheDanceofLife chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I loved that one! Another great bit of "fluff"...I thoroughly enjoyed reading it; definitely worth the time and more! I especially liked the part about "23,428 leaves later..." that was hilarious! :) Great job, keep writing!
| AmberGlow2 chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
very nice and sweet! Funny too!
| Kuroi Garyuu chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I love the whole Edward and shampoo thing! LOL! Cute!
| Eve Royal chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
It was so funny... Edward was going crazy... The kitchen scene was awesome. I kept imagining Alice rolling around her bedroom floor laughing her head off.
Thanx for the amazing story!
| my bleeding tears of agony chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA
| anokasdoll chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I am speechless. This was beautiful. The emotions leaked off the page and his feelings were very well described. I love it when I find a story that simply blows me away, as this did. I find writing from Edward’s perspective very difficult, but you did a wonderful job – all the way from dealing with Alice to dealing with his strength.
Welcome to the favourites.
| icefang7 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
this was really cute! thanks, i enjoyed it.
| seriouscaseofthegayface chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I loved it, especially the last line. It was really amazing! Well done!