Reviews for Better
Eli42 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
Loved it!
doop chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
good
Accountclozed chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Very hot but nice :)
anime2 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Amazing story :)
ajhalecullen chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
WOW! that was soooo hot!

Good job :D
chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Very sexy! well donexx
The Deep Abyss 345 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I really enjoyed reading this story. Very sexy.
Blaze828 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
e.e
Fifille chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
You are one of the few people who can write long, detailed smut without it being all gross and gory. ) 10/10 Hell to the Yeah!
Cullen86ers chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
That was so cute. Yummy and hot too.
Pyrofrickenmaniac chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
*insane clapping* I've finally found a great Alice/Jasper smut! I loved the way that Jasper presses himself to her when he climaxes!

So romatic and sexy! Very steamy! I loved it!

Super-fav story!
koko23cat chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Very good. All the details without being tacky and yucky. Well done!
Jemima84 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
nice one :)

and who doesnt want Jasper being naked...lol
mypet55 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
i really loved this its really sweet.

-pet
child of a fallen angel chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
The right amount of smut and love. It was really good!
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