|Reviews for Better|
| twlightbella chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
They have sex
| Eli42 chapter 1 . 10/20/2013
| doop chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
| Accountclozed chapter 1 . 9/4/2012
Very hot but nice :)
| DarkMonkey511 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
Amazing story :)
| ajhalecullen chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
WOW! that was soooo hot!
Good job :D
| chavamirjam chapter 1 . 4/1/2011
Very sexy! well donexx
| The Deep Abyss 345 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I really enjoyed reading this story. Very sexy.
| Blaze828 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
| Fifille chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
You are one of the few people who can write long, detailed smut without it being all gross and gory. ) 10/10 Hell to the Yeah!
| Cullen86ers chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
That was so cute. Yummy and hot too.
| Pyrofrickenmaniac chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
*insane clapping* I've finally found a great Alice/Jasper smut! I loved the way that Jasper presses himself to her when he climaxes!
So romatic and sexy! Very steamy! I loved it!
| koko23cat chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Very good. All the details without being tacky and yucky. Well done!
| Jemima84 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
nice one :)
and who doesnt want Jasper being naked...lol
| mypet55 chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
i really loved this its really sweet.