Reviews for Can I Really Change?
shadowpredaking1 chapter 5 . 4/30
Great story man, I hope you update it can't wait for it
narunel fan22 chapter 5 . 9/13/2014
When is the next chapter going to be on here the story is really good I want to know what happens next
davis chapter 5 . 7/20/2014
I love it keep doing what you are doing
Rebmul chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
grammar and spelling arnt so good but the story is great I enjoyed it keepem coming and don't let ppl with negative reviews get you down this is your story so have fun with it that's all that should matter
snake1980 chapter 4 . 5/18/2014
man chapter 4 was great wish I was in naruto shoes. guess ill have to read chap 5 to see what happens next keep up the great work
snake1980 chapter 3 . 5/14/2014
nice job on chapter 3. cant wait to see what else they are going to teach naruto.
snake1980 chapter 2 . 5/13/2014
man I wish I was in naruto place when hana was showing him about the female body and also when anko asked him what he thought of her choice in clothing. guess ill have to read the next chapter to see what happens next I can just guess. keep up the great work
snake1980 chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
first chapter was good its different. guess ill have to go read the next chapter to see what happens the next day.
silverback95 chapter 5 . 5/12/2014
Loved it supper good
silverback95 chapter 1 . 5/11/2014
I liked this story a lot and the other story sounds good to but I like this one a little more most likely it's because narutos a hanyou
ArinaSugarBaby chapter 5 . 9/10/2013
So far this has been very enjoyable and this one seemed to have the least amount of errors but still some grammar issues I wish you the best of luck with this story.
ArinaSugarBaby chapter 3 . 9/10/2013
Truth be told it's not the spelling so much as it's the grammar and no you don't need it to be college level it would help to have it at 9th grade level so the story Can flow better then what it is. Because when a story flows like it should it becomes very enjoyable.
ArinaSugarBaby chapter 2 . 9/10/2013
This was cleaner then the last chapter but still some errors. This won't help with the plot but with the story there should have been a page break some kinda of line bold words naming the chapter after the notes you had for readers so we know where the story starts. I can't say to much on rather this story is good or not but I can say that it is interesting.
ArinaSugarBaby chapter 1 . 9/10/2013
Not just spelling grammar as well but so far nice concept even if the nine tails was a Fox and not a wolf
LonelyPurpleKitsune chapter 5 . 8/31/2013
Just finshed reading what you have so far an i have to say even though you say your spelling is not that good it realy is fine its more you not puting them in places you could to help the story flow better. It is a great story an i hope to see to finshed unlike most of the storys i like. The only other thing that i would like to see is if you could slow down the plot of the story. While it is a good story it feels like you are trying to rush it. Other then that its a great story that with a few lityle fixs could be realy good. If you every want someone to go through it an help let me know id be glad to hepl
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