Reviews for The Goblin Inheritance
asm613 chapter 2 . 10/28/2010
wow- this peter is a PRICK. the girl was already going to do it for strangers- so why not do it for friends. peter calling harry those judgemental names makes us seem that he would think the girl a whore and a slave trader- selling her babies_ who the fuck is he to be the moral authority
dark flame dragon chapter 6 . 7/28/2010
i love how you are portraying the characters in this series and was wondering if you have any intentions of putting warren and matthew together even if that would be a major spoiler relevation but i feel like it would fit with how you have developed their personalities and would fix any inrequited feelings warren has
clow12391 just not logged in chapter 6 . 6/14/2010
Pleaseeeeeee update this story! I absolutely loved the first one, and the 2nd is also exciting! I really really would love to see where you take the story!

:D
tobias foxdemon chapter 6 . 3/12/2010
I hope you'll have the chance to update this story sometime... I really enjoyed the first one a lot and this one is good so far too! _
Lemonen chapter 6 . 2/5/2010
I've got to admit this is one of the most interesting spiderman stories i've read so far. I loved the first one, and the sequel seems so promising! I'm still checking for updates.
ToxicGalaxy chapter 6 . 12/14/2009
I love this story [and the first of course]

Please continue?
Harlequin Jade chapter 6 . 2/15/2009
This story just keeps getting better and better! And so far its only 6 chapters long! Wow...
JohnneyAntonelli chapter 5 . 12/23/2008
Oh man! Too short!

I love this story. You've just got such a great plotline going.

Can't wait for the next chapter.
Harlequin Jade chapter 5 . 12/23/2008
He knows! Ah! Now what? I wonder what he's gonna do with information now... I can't wait to read the next chapter!
firedraygon chapter 5 . 12/23/2008
Oh lovely~ I really like how Otto comes through and tells Ben all this. Can't wait for the 'I am your son' encounter that's coming. Or at least, I hope that's coming. Great chapter. Please write more soon!

~fd97
KichigaiKairu chapter 4 . 11/26/2008
This story is so GREAT! The previous one, the Goblin...something i can't remember, was awesome, too. Read it all in one sitting. Was up 'till 3 am. I can't wait to see what happens w/ Penny and Ben. And Emily is EVIL. anyway, keep up the good work! XD
firedraygon chapter 4 . 11/7/2008
Whoa, looking forward to when Harry confronts Ben then, haha. "What are your intentions with my daughter, young man?"

Great chapter. I like how Penny ends up having 3 dads. Please write more soon!

~fd97
Harlequin Jade chapter 4 . 11/6/2008
So Emily knows...Damn. I'm really looking to the Guys meeting Ben...
darkwing21 chapter 4 . 10/31/2008
Oh, wow. Finally a sequel!

I really love your work. Don't stop!
firedraygon chapter 3 . 10/16/2008
Ah, I hope Ben can come over to Penny's some time. That'd be interesting, haha. Great work with this. I love all the sweet gestures, like Harry tucking Peter's hair behind his ear. Please write more soon!

~fd97
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