Reviews for Pieces of My Heart
SashaLee29 chapter 29 . 4/28/2020
Hey, just wandering, did you take the prequel down? Or was it moved to another authors page? Please let me know! Loved, loved, loved the story by the way, thank you for not ending it unhappily!
Guest chapter 15 . 10/6/2017
You suck at writing. You should stop.
lol chapter 32 . 6/26/2017
So this was my first time reading an Alice/Jasper AH story and I guess, I like this one. Of course, it's no masterpiece, for the plot being too cheesy, but it's well written and sweet. Thanks for sharing.
kayk806 chapter 32 . 2/16/2017
perfect. couldnt stop reading
Guest chapter 32 . 10/19/2015
Good one
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 28 . 7/23/2015
well at least Paul has Leah :)
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 27 . 7/23/2015
Did Faye forget all about Paul because she seemed to forget he was one of the constant father figures in her life.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 26 . 7/23/2015
oh Maria deserved it the vindictive soulless bitch
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 24 . 7/23/2015
Omg its so wrong. Its a sinking ship. I specifically read this fanfic rooting for Jasper and Alice only to find I'm rooting to my very soul for Paul
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 22 . 7/23/2015
Now Alice is being unbearable.

I like what you did there with Maria and her "pregnancy."
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 16 . 7/23/2015
OMG Paul…. the scene was heart wrenching.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 15 . 7/23/2015
I am not in any way hating on your fanfic at all. I like it actually. Jasper drives me mad though. Despite the fact that i don't like Maria as a person, Jasper owed it to her and Alice to break it off before anything. Cheating on his fucking fiancee shows no respect for his relationship with Maria and towards Alice
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 10 . 7/23/2015
The way Jasper handled it all is ridiculous, selfish and immature.
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 8 . 7/23/2015
Jesus, normally i would sympathise with the Maria in her position but she is unbearable and unlikable. Not relatable at all.
Jasper and Alice asap please hahaha
Snappher chapter 26 . 11/24/2013
Omg, howling! A flying tooth! Hahahahahahahahahahaha! Bitch had it comin!
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