|Reviews for Eloped|
| miso ramen goddess chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
This was so cute and
OMFG ALLEN HOW CAN SOOMEONE BE SO SELFISH AND SELFLESS AT THE SAME TIME?
but great story!
| Avan chapter 1 . 4/24/2009
hah! i love the voice in your fic. it's great. Allen is clueless as always.
| ElricKeyblade chapter 1 . 1/11/2009
Heheheh, this story was both funny and sweet. I LOVED how Allen woke up screaming, "Akuma! Where!" XD
All in all, GREAT job! bd
| coolzonegurl chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
That's funny. I laughed reading your story. I hope they DON'T get annulled. It's plain and simple and...so interesting!. Pls continue the story! Now i have officially viewed this story
| addenza chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
xD This was a nice one!
| Moon Of Jupiter chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
I can't believed i nearly missed this!
is so riddled with yaoi, it's so hard to pick out what's not!
good work! I don't think that there were any grammar mistakes in your story and it was fluent!
Love the fact that you married AllenXLenalee...
Wonder how Komui would react tho...lol...*sigh* Allen is still so dense, if only he could pluck up the courage to tell her that he likes her *chuckles*, hope to see more!
| Banu Thebes chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
That was perfect. XD A part of me wants to know what happens next, but as a one shot its peerfect! You write really well, and both Allen and Lenalee were completely in character.
Although Allen with stubble conjures really odd mental images. o.O
| Incredibalistic chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I love it! I think you could totally make a full, chaptered story out of it if you wanted. It's a great idea though, and even in this situation, the characters weren't out of character at all. I love the idea, and it was written very well in my opinion. :)
| Neko-sama no Kokoro chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I loved it. XD It was so enjoyable to read!
| IOTR chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
That was very cute
| wlock chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
That was a great one-shot. Allen can be so dense sometimes...
I hope you write more AllenxLenalee fics!