Reviews for Wish Carefully
TheLoneDoctorVII chapter 1 . 10/23
Very well done. Felt like I was reading Malfoys genuine memoirs
Tagcircles chapter 1 . 9/20
Fittingly, every one of these issues could’ve been predicted if the Dark supporters paid any attention to muggle history and studies. Though, that is the point of their failures.

Isolationism cripples global trade and weakens the economy? North Korea

Having few children with a preference towards males? Ramifications of China’s one child policy

A society runs not on its leaders, but rather the common man with trade skills and production of goods? Anyone with a basic understanding of economics can tell you that.

A population’s health and fitness comes not from a fabled “superior bloodline” but rather a large and diverse gene pool? They don’t even have to look at muggles, the Gaunts (and by extension Voldemort’s prowess) were prime examples
SkyPalaceBuilder chapter 1 . 9/3
I’ve read this story a few times.

You know what I find really creepy, on my last read?

There’s no mention of Narcissa. Not that I can see. None at all. His wife, and Lucius doesn’t mention her even once.

That also adds another chilling aspect, to Lucius’s misogyny that you show in this fic.

…What happened to her? Somehow, no answer is worse.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/25
Thinly veiled globohomo propaganda.
Romedov chapter 1 . 7/15
Outstanding!
HPMARIE chapter 1 . 6/11
love this!
Fleurie chapter 1 . 3/20
Incroyable. En effet, il faut se méfier de ce que l'on souhaite. Cela le résume parfaitement bien.
summer164 chapter 1 . 3/17
Adore this as it shows what us likely to happen. Voldemort never seemed to become fully sane again and he is used to lashing out whenever he wants. So what happens when he ahs no more mudbloods, he turns on the purebloods.

And the purebloods are rich but dont know how to run the economy. I see them more as old money so they don't know about like the economy works for normal people.
notsofrilly chapter 1 . 3/7
Wow.

Your story was linked on a Reddit post and I just found it. Amazing work. Perfectly shows how arrogance and greed will be your undoing. You may not realize it now, but one day it will happen.
lunaz chapter 1 . 2/22
Loved reading this again.
rmw5763 chapter 1 . 2/19
Absolutely love this perspective. Be careful what you wish for. No Truer Words.
EnchanteLeviosa chapter 1 . 12/21/2023
Thoroughly enjoyed this story, great little one shot and view of what could have happened! Scary times. Always enjoy stories from Lucius, hes so deliciously nasty. :D Thank you for your story!
Merendino Emilia chapter 1 . 10/30/2023
Quite Majestic work
Rebatrek chapter 1 . 10/29/2023
I gotta say I love this fic! Justice!
Llirbwerdnadivad chapter 1 . 10/3/2023
This was very well made. It's a very creative solution to the problem of Voldemort and the Death Eaters and I found myself entranced while I was reading.
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