Reviews for With the Doctor's Help
Prism Bunny chapter 1 . 3/15
This story was pretty good! It was cute and it definitely gives you the feels.
The story has a couple mild problems involving the writing composition. There was a lack in punctuation in some sentences (particularly dialogue), and some of the sentences were too short and choppy. I know that long sentences are hard to read, but sentences that are too short can be hard to digest as well. Don't worry, it is not the worst writing I've seen in a fanfiction. I'm just trying to give you some suggestions so that you can prosper with your writing!
Otherwise, the story was a delight! I nearly cried a couple times, so the emotions are definitely played out well. As a matter of fact, I would actually like to see the Doctor visit L in his later years. That would be very interesting, especially if L decided to travel with him in the TARDIS.
Continue your good work!
Angry nerd girl chapter 1 . 12/7/2015
Wow. This is amazing. I love the part were the doctor calls lawliet (that's how it's spelled, right?) the nickname. Please please please write more.
Superwhonotelock chapter 1 . 9/13/2015
MOAR STORI NOOOOWWWW PLZ
MyNameIsBlinky chapter 1 . 8/10/2015
Me likey.
kitizl chapter 1 . 4/10/2014
It's cool!
iamgoku chapter 1 . 8/31/2013
you should make the other chapters , I think it would be really good
the first chapter I think was written brilliantly
Bones14 chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
keep on updating
Anna Rowebot chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
Please make another chapter! I really liked it! Pretty please make another chapter! I'll give you a cookie :)
guess chapter 1 . 3/30/2012
Aw I wish there was more to this!
Tenshi Nightingale-Strife chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
You must continue this. && I'm not just saying this because it's 1:10 in the morning and I'm on a sugar high. That was like master and stuff. So yeah. Work on that four-shot.
SUPER HAPPY RANDOM FUN TIEMZ8 chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPPPER I WILL LOVE YOU FOREVER
KamiByul chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I think it would be cool if you continued it
Plumalchemyst chapter 1 . 9/12/2010
aw that was sweet
the-stretch-beyond-spandex chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Please continue! I love how the doctor suggests L's nicknam xxx Nicolette
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
"M-m-my n-n-name is L-L-Lawliett A-A-Alington."

LIES!

His name is L. Lawliett.

The least you can do is use his real name.

I know no one knows what the L stands for. Just, IDK, make something up! Luke? Lawrence?
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