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4701rose chapter 1 . 11/11/2014
TTxTT So sad! Poor Zuko . . .
soupcan chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
This is brilliant. Also very depressing, but brilliant.
I imagine that Spirit!Aang was probably very frustrated with having to wait for his next incarnation to grow up enough to communicate and show the Gaang where to find Zuko. And everyone would probably be horrified that they didn't rescue Zuko sooner, despite Katara trying to rationalize it. She's probably just as torn up inside about it... And Zuko will probably be mad that they took eight years to come for him, despite understanding on a mental level that they thought he was dead...
Gah, so many feels to explore. I'd be very interested in seeing a part two!
Arlya chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
That was incredible. Not even lengthy but still had me upset and then happy. So well written!
JDPhoenix chapter 1 . 7/4/2014
I'm crying. I hate you and I'm crying and that was amazing.
LadyBlueMoon2 chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
Wow...just... wow.
too-much-inspiration chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
Tragic but hopeful. Very nicely balanced between the two. Thank you for writing and posting this!
irezel chapter 1 . 8/23/2013
owowowowow, that hurt in a beautiful way. lovely story. :)
wolfeclipse25 chapter 1 . 4/28/2013
The ending was so sweet... I loved it.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I just love this the characterization is excellent and so dark but yet so hopeful is there a follow up to this? If So I would love the link. This story is so good it really should be dusted off and follow up
Archerylefty chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Loves this very dark lots of characterization. Tragic yet hopeful. I was wondering if you could direct me to the tribute Chapter written. Or if yo would consider dusting it off yourself especially like to see how much he is able to heal and how he is able to be Sifu Hotman again. You've go end him a very authentic voice. He is a Guy for who quitting does not exist not ever
Glades of Grey chapter 1 . 3/19/2013
Very interesting! Nicely done!
Hermonthis chapter 1 . 1/22/2013
I found about this story because Rashaka had paid tribute to it with a continuing short of her own. :) This was absolutely lovely. I could feel time slip away into nothingness as Zuko retreated into his memories to escape the pain of the present. Lyrna is adorable, but knowing she's the Avatar now is a bit heartbreaking because it means her predecessor failed. It tugs at the heartstrings in a good way. :)
one-who-loves-Sesshy chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Angst and yet bright, love it!
Eliza Aacher chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
*gross sobbing*
Keyanna chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
I love this story. The gradual revelation of past events is so well done, and it fits in perfectly with Zuko's own splintered perceptions.
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