|Reviews for Come Full Circle|
| Rasengalia chapter 11 . 7/14
I hope you decide to continue this awesome story.
| Anonymouse chapter 11 . 4/29
So far the plot development, techniques, and characters are all friggin' amazing.
| Bearer of Chaos chapter 11 . 4/18
So I found this story and decided to read, knowing about the hiatus, and was very pleasantly suprised to find that it was far better than I expected. In fact, while reading I was remined of May Wren's Naruto: Myoushuu no Fuuin, a favorite of mine, and quite popular if the number of favorites is to be believed. What I mean to say by mentioning this is the impressions I recieved while reading your story led me to believe that it had potentional, potental to become a highly favorited story, and as such I have to mention I am sad that you decided to stop working on it. However, I will be sure to check out your other works, best of writing to you.
Bearer of Chaos
| Ageant chapter 11 . 4/10
You piece of shit. I read like 6 chapter s before I saw you wrote it. Damn you. Update soon pls:-)
| reviewer chapter 11 . 3/7
| Annoy mouse chapter 6 . 3/5
Eh? Naruto has been pretty much focusing entirely on his chakra control, however weird, and yet you had his control being pathetic? So he has to perform an additional 'seal' before doing anything? How on earth is that better?
And they invent a seal for perfect chakra control, except for some, unstated arbitrary reason it has to be performed by the 'chakra writing' method? Why can't he have some tattoos, or something? Why wouldn't that work?
And this 'chakra writing' method thing exists in canon to an extent, it's how the Fourth Hokage uses his famous flashy jutsu whenever he doesn't use his kunai. And others use it to place complicated seals in places at just a touch.
Your method seems to be temporary, weaker, far more difficult, and have the advantage of hovering in the air. It's basically hand seals without the hand movements but with glowing symbols formed with his mind instead, but hand seals can be trained away with practice anyway. The sole advantage over hand seals seems to be hypothetical more complicated jutsus. Except jutsus can already be incredibly complicated, and the touch seal method is there too.
I can't really see why you'd focus so much on this when it seems you are just going to be using it as a ninjutsu replacement. Why not just have him invent ninjutsu? Seems to be about the same, of not better.
If I have this wrong please correct me, I'd really like to know.
| Annoy mouse chapter 1 . 3/5
An excellent start!
| kanjichibi chapter 1 . 11/15/2014
| Just a reader chapter 11 . 9/23/2014
Nooo! Why?! Why did you have to give up on such an awesome story?! I am frowning so hard right now. Anyway amazing work and I'm going to go look into any other stories of yours that look interesting, so... bye! Don't Forget To Be Awesome! :)
| DraconisVladisDrake chapter 11 . 9/18/2014
noooooooo! it was sooo awesome! you can't just leave it there.
| kitsune chapter 11 . 8/23/2014
wait was naruto taking a gamble saying he was the container or was it a statement?
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/20/2014
This has to be the most amazing Genin squad I've ever had the pleasure of reading about.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/18/2014
lol. i like this naruto. very smart. the team interaction is fun! does he really believe he is the container or just the bluff?
| Tepheris chapter 5 . 7/1/2014
This chapters was laugh out loud hilarious. Sharingan Hiden Doujutsu no Ougi: Ramen no Shi Hai!
| CrazyFan chapter 11 . 5/8/2014
Please please please! You have to update soon I'm in love with the story! I'm begging!