That is so sweet and a little bit sad.

Nicely done and well written. I enjoyed this. :D

Yeah, I agree, but I also agree that they are Gibbs' (unofficially) adopted kids. Great job!

Good job!

She reluctantly found him to have the most charming smile and a wicked sense of humor. He wasn't afraid of her unlike many of the new probies, but never got too smart-assed either. HE SO HAS ALL OF THOSE THINGS.

Another cute little story.

I love them as brother/sister ytoo.

And didn't think they clicked at first.

I just can't get over the sheer brilliance of Abby thinking she trained the "whelp". Makes me burst into random giggles just thinking about it (:

I enjoyed reading this, so thanks for sharing!

I liked it. Tracy

Awesome job !

That was amazing. And lovely. I like the comparison with a shy whelp.

This is definitely rather an interesting take how they became friends, and I like it. Feels natural.

Congrats! Lots of stars!

Good story, I really enjoyed it

I don't see them clicking right away either, and I totally see Tony needing to be trained in platonic hugging.

I love that scene in Kill Ari (Part II), one of the saddest but nicest parts of that episode. You're definitely right about them being completely different (just think about how they imagine Kate).

They also balance each other out: "He wasn’t afraid of her unlike many of the new probies, but never got too smart-assed either."

Loved this story.

I enjoyed that. You got to love Abby's stubborn persistence.

All "Yum" said.(contented sigh)