Reviews for Lucky
roveme chapter 14 . 1/8
Wow! Really, I can't believe the last chapter is a cliffhanger. I so much wanted to read more and it is so sad that it is discontinued.
Cindy M 19 chapter 14 . 9/30/2015
This is so cute XD I love it.
princessanime29 chapter 14 . 2/15/2015
I remember reading this before and now that i just re-read it it just as suspenseful as before if not even more so. The way you potray each of the characters thoughts is amazing and on point! Like in one review i also like how you include the reason as to why Hichigo loves Rukia. I hope you can come up with an idea for the next chapter. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. Oh and if you need ideas you should ask some of the reviewers! Good luck!
NikiBffl chapter 14 . 11/2/2013
This is such a great Fanfic ! I love it! Please write more, it makes me smile that Hichigo has a spot for Rukia in his... Non-exsistent heart. Arigatou for creating this story and sharing with the world.
Ejammer chapter 14 . 9/19/2013
come on this story is cool please continue with a cherry on top
TwistedShadows42 chapter 14 . 7/28/2013
Woah o.o
Galaxia chapter 14 . 6/24/2013
Aww! What a note to leave off on! It's been more than a year since the last update, so I doubt any more will be added to this story, but it would've been really interesting to see where the relationship went. This is a true rarity among Bleach fanfics, a Rukia/Ichigo/Hollow Ichigo interaction story that ISN'T defined mainly by ranting and raving from the Hollow. I've always felt the fandom tends to exaggerate Hollow Ichigo into some slavering monster, when he's always shown flashes of being more than that. It's rather hilarious now in hindsight, with the most recent events in chapter 540-542, how the previous characterizations have been jossed and yours looks a lot closer to the truth!

It's also great how you gave Hollow Ichigo his own reason for his feelings toward Rukia, separate from Ichigo's own feelings for Rukia, and it works within the canon Bleach explanations. With as tightly as Kubo-sensei has interrelated everything in the series, that's a particularly tricky line to navigate.

I hope this is not the end of an intriguing series, but much like Rukia, I wouldn't have the faintest clue about where to go from here! I know it would've been an interesting ending, and one heck of a ride to get there.
princessanime29 chapter 12 . 5/28/2013
I like the ending sentence. And it was in love with her. And yes everything alive has feelings its not weird that Hichigo has them too. XD
princessanime29 chapter 11 . 5/27/2013
Thats exactly what I do. If I want to forget for a while I go to sleep. How come Hichigo cant sleep,is that something Hollows cant do? Are they unable to sleep?
princessanime29 chapter 8 . 5/27/2013
You are evil! But thats awesome because I want to see how you will make Hichigo get to Rukia :)
princessanime29 chapter 2 . 5/26/2013
Wow hollow ichigo is really sweet in this one. He would probably keep going even if she didnt like it or enjoy what he was doing. I like this story its really sweet : )
avvrilstar chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Omg plz plz plz update!
chinguchan chapter 14 . 5/16/2013
How i love this story Hichigo..
avvrilstar chapter 12 . 5/1/2013
I am very n love with this chapter... Theres just no words for this!
avvrilstar chapter 8 . 4/29/2013
LOL it is a complement, {forbidden love! }
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