Reviews for Life of the Doll
amatheriz chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
interesting, though there were some grammar mistakes. i hope when you come back you'll pick this up again. }
LonelyRedTears chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
I love the idea.
Castiel-Loves-Angel chapter 1 . 9/5/2009
that was really good i loved it...[tee hee]
Sarcism chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
Well, I like how this story is going so far. However, English isn't your first language, I presume? In a story, one always writes in past tense unless the context states otherwise. I can spot many many grammatical errors already, although your punctuation and sentence structure is pretty good. Get a beta reader and this story would be much much better. :)
Junichi chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Great idea xD
Kichou chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Really cute. I hope that we see a jealous Zack in here. Update please.
Psychotic Sprite chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
Hey, I'm very interested in where your going to go with this story, it's the first I've come across so far. Can't wait until you post the next chapter!

Ja ne :)
Sasami10 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Oh I enjoyed this very much and it has my favorite yaoi couple. Update soon? Pretty please? Oh one more thing I think you might of had a couple of grammer mistakes. Then again I could be wrong since I'm reading this very late at night. ;