|Reviews for When the spirit cries|
| ReneyC chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
wow! The angst! Thanks for a great read. I felt like I was sitting there in that room, ventilator hissing... waiting for Ponch to come back.. Looking forward to reading more from you!
| DaynaWayna chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
What a nice surprise to find all your stories here Dorisann! I've read many of them on other sites, but was not able to leave reviews. Now I can! Yay! LOL
You're going to keep me busy reading for a while, I see. LOL
I really enjoyed this story... it's Jon angst in reverse! LOL And Poor Ponch... stupid snake. LOL I like the "dream" sequences for Ponch.. how he's searching for Jon; how he keeps seeing/feeling the snake. I really liked when they were defibbing him and Ponch thought it was the snake. I loved that description.
I'm looking forward to re-reading these stories. :)