|Reviews for The Christmas list|
| ReneyC chapter 1 . 7/5/2008
Great Story, loved reading this, and it is so true. Its Just like Jon and Ponch to help do something like this. I loved the followup you did with Jeff, 20 years later. Looking forward to reading more stories from you.
| DaynaWayna chapter 1 . 7/4/2008
OMG Dorisann! What a beautiful story! I just loved it! So typical of Jon and Ponch to try and do things on their own that the others would want to help with.
And I loved Bear with the playground money! How sweet! Next to Jon, I think he's my favorite cop. Well, him and Bruce. But Jon truly has my heart. ::giggles::
I love Jon's 'speech' to Jeff at the end; so much like him. And then you have the place burn down! How sad! And poor Jeff had to be there to respond! But it was a beautiful ending to a wonderful story. :)