Reviews for I'll be there |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. I really love how very well in character you portray her... everyone needs someone at times, though... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mhmm. There were a couple of oopsies on the way concerning tenses, but I thought this chapter was definitely the best until now. You're digging into her past and emotions, and I'm sure that can be very interesting. I have laughed as well with sometimes only little sequences of words, like this: "Did you hit your pretty head on the way? Otherwise you surely wouldn't come in with that! Or would you like me to push you?" - that had me laughing aloud, and was so damn in-character... dead on! Well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. Very thoughtful to mention the infusion. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I sometimes would like to kill Miranda... but hey, it means that you have been very much in character! :) I missed a few commas, but nevertheless this was very well written; the pacing was just fine, as was the level of description - very good work of you and your beta. I'm still wondering what operation she had, and where her daughters are, so I fear that I'll have to continue reading... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm wondering what she was being operated on... I personally missed a few bits of details here and there, like when she suddenly dials the number of Mr. Maison without having read about her reaching for the phone on the desk or her mobile, but overall I thought this was very well written and intirguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mhmm. I really liked this beginning. Miranda has annoyed me without limits the whole movie through... and at the very same time I felt nothing but sorry for her, because there surely must be a reason why she behaves like that. I just have to add that I'm jealous at the number of reviews, too. XS |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely loved this story. Are you going to do a sequel or just leave it where it is? |
![]() ![]() ![]() argh I wanted to use this review chapter for cheering you for more, but now I can only praise you for a very well done story *pout* ... okay Ijust have to make sure you get the hint want more of your poison! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm "relatively" new with this pairing so I've never read it since the first post but since you post the last one I've read it non-stop D It was addictive, love the difficult Miranda 'cause she was kind of scare, well at the end I understood that. Love all the caring from Andy and how she stood by her. It was a lovely story Looking forward to your next creations with wonderful mere words! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story! I was rooting for the Miranda's health, and by them in love, from the beginning. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story with us. Maybe there's a sequel? In any case, congratulations, and thank you! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful story. I'm sorry it has come to the end. I enjoyed your take on Miranda and Andy. Thanks for the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. I loved this story from the beginning and I'm so very glad that you continued to the finish. Thank you so very much for writing and sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep going with this- Mimi Maya Nica Sage Mike Rowan & Micky Peace Out Cub Scouts -DEPRCREW |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. It was beautifully written. Miranda is such a piece of work, but Andy knows and understands her. It does beg a sequel, a sexually charged sequel, with a healthy Miranda having LOTS of sex with Andy! Just an idea! |
![]() ![]() I really liked this fic, still the end was quiet sudden, then again if it were up to me fics like this one do not end at all, and where would that take us? Thank you for writing this wonderful story and sharing it with us. |