|Reviews for Help!|
| CaptainAlias chapter 31 . 6/6/2011
Let me start by saying that I really, really liked this story. The angst is so real that you can't help but emphasize with the characters. Which, by the way, have been written spot on. However, I do have to admit that the Doctor sometimes felt a little bit off; he always seemed more like the type to bury his feelings instead of talk about them. I realize that once you start talking about a traumatic experience, it feels like a dam has burst and everything comes flooding out. In other words, your characterization for the Doctor fits for the context of this story, with a few exceptions.
Also, I love your writing style; you manage to convey the complex emotions of depression as well as the terror of a trauma victim very clearly. With very few grammatical errors, too. I love you just for that.
Overall, this is one of those rare, high-quality fan fictions that was actually worth 's just say that I was up extraordinarily late reading this, and I don't even regret the resulting headache. I hope that you decide to continue the sequel (I want to read your take on the Time War, but I understand how you might run out of steam.
| RosesandEdgars chapter 1 . 3/26/2011
Good chap can't wait to read more
| JennyLeigh chapter 31 . 10/10/2010
I really loved and enjoyed this story. The angst is so real and I really felt for the doctor. Good ideas, good depth, excellent writing. The last few chapters really threw me though...I felt very let down by the end of the story. I think the story could keep going - as it's a healing story and I was so interested in the Doctor and Captain Jack's friendship as well as his friendship with the Doctor...I wish it kept going.
I'll read more of what you write! Am a fan!
| Astrie123 chapter 31 . 7/5/2010
Would love to see another story.
| Skycross chapter 31 . 4/28/2010
I don't understand the end of your story because it doesn't look like a end but the begining of a new story. What is it then? Hope you can answer me soon enougth. Thanks!
| Kate Maxwell chapter 30 . 4/26/2010
The old girl being playful at the end there, hey? Couldn't resist it, but glad that he's feeling his normal self in this chapter!
Sorry its took so long to read this, but reviewing now
Great work, and just felt that wanted to hug him as much as Donna had to in those talks!
| Hilary Weston chapter 31 . 4/25/2010
Thank you for this story. I have enjoyed the journey through the Doctor's problems and recovery.
It's a good place to stop as the Doctor has done just about all he can now except let time take it's course. I look forward to the next story.
| KsandraMallan chapter 31 . 4/25/2010
Oh -no-, poor Martha... aw. *Eagerly awaits next fic*
What did you think of Smith, btw?
| pipinheart chapter 31 . 4/23/2010
Poor Francine... Why did Leo do it, I wonder...and how is the Doctor going to make it better, they sound as if they are in the same boat, but they are like family and need each other...
Can't wait for the next one...
| chellusauglerie chapter 31 . 4/23/2010
wow... I can't wait for the next installment. Good job, especially iwth the ending. Quite a great lead in.
| Kyer chapter 30 . 4/22/2010
And about time too! (The happiness, I mean.) *grin*
| ChellusAuglerie chapter 30 . 4/22/2010
Yay! HAPPY! Doctor!
| pipinheart chapter 30 . 4/21/2010
Very lovely... That had to be the hardest thing for the Doctor talking to everyone... All of them had messed up reasons, the only ones who had any sound ones were Dede, adn jethro. Poor Jethro, has had it rough...
The universe does owe him some happiness...
Can't wait for more...
| cazzette chapter 4 . 3/1/2010
Have to say very good story. I feel very sad for the doctor
| The Queen of Confusion chapter 29 . 2/16/2010
Great story! Hope to see more soon!