|Reviews for The Circle of Life|
| MyTomKim2 chapter 3 . 6/10/2012
You are an exceptional writer and this story captured the characters perfectly. I'm so glad I stumbled across your story. Amazing.
| 1991-Old-school-kid chapter 3 . 7/14/2011
Great story! i hope u continue it!
| Ashley chapter 3 . 9/26/2010
update soon please!
| Jemlela chapter 3 . 9/8/2009
I love the story. hope you plan on continuing
| ufc91 chapter 2 . 3/4/2009
Beautiful writing. You did an excellent job handling the characters and showing their emotions.
| jps1926 chapter 3 . 2/7/2009
Oh, I loved that moment when Tommy proposed. It was so cute how they replayed the moment of their first kiss. You get major kudos for that. I felt bad that he didn't get the answer he wanted right away.
If you end it here, I don't mind. We pretty much know what happens next. This would be such a nice way to end. A baby boy, an engagement, joy. Especially with the sweet moment between Tommy and his mom, what more could we ask for? As far as I'm concerned, The Circle of Life is complete.
| jps1926 chapter 2 . 2/7/2009
Wow, I never thought I'd read a TK story where a teddy bear could've killed Kim. I could just imagine her in her little BMW with a huge teddy bear as a passenger.
Boy did this chapter turn serious. I can see why Tommy got so sick. He was hit with two HUGE blows at one time. I was surprised he was able to stand up straight. I loved the talk between Tommy and Kim. He jumped right into serious talk mode and there was nothing she could do about it. And then she said it... "I know that no matter how much pain I had caused you or how far apart we were, you’d always come if anything ever happened to me.” My hope exactly.
To find out what happened in Kim's past was so unexpected. That was just... WOW! Tommy really is her white knight!
| jps1926 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009
This story is everything you hope Kim and Tommy's relationship would be as adults. As a fan of Tommy and Kim, I always hoped that despite what happened between them, they would always be there for each other. Amongst tragedy, something beautiful is forming.
I thought it was touching that Tommy left his black dino gem with his father. And the bond between Kim and Mrs. Oliver is so sweet. The revelation that Kim's dad died several years prior helps us understand even more of why Kim is so compassionate and understanding of what Tommy needs. My favorite moment is when they both realize that they're both wearing practically the same outfits. I'm glad to see this continue.
| Fire Dolphin chapter 3 . 1/21/2009
aw very cute story. hope to read more son. update please
| Shawn30 chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
Fantastic. The emotion behind the story, the maturity of the characters, the serious content and the pacing of TK's relationship set this story in a class way above and beyond the typical crap that gets posted her. There's so much heart and soul in this story and the details have a professional feel to them. I highly recommend it.
| C2 chapter 3 . 9/3/2008
I think this is a perfect place to end this story. WOW! such great work.
Thank you for writing this, looking forward to more stories in the future,
| hewhoreaps chapter 3 . 9/2/2008
Well that was a good chapter and if your going to end it thats the way to do it
| rosebudjamie chapter 3 . 9/2/2008
wow i can't wait to read more, please update really soon
| hansongirl14 chapter 3 . 9/2/2008
Loved it, it was so sweet! Can't wait for the next update!
| asianprincess chapter 3 . 9/2/2008
Loved this chapter- they are my favourite couple and im glad they are together for good (hopefully). I would enjoy reading another chapter about their life- possible a bit in the future when their son is a few years old and how they are getting on?
Thank you and update soon please...