Reviews for The Final Challange
Dubious Writings chapter 9 . 7/26/2008
Nice job. You got some spelling mistakes and some un past tenses. It doesn't matter though. I get loads of spelling mistakes... Keep updating dude...I mean dudette...
august child chapter 9 . 7/25/2008
Yes! Big racing stuff! Keep up the great work!
august child chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
Whoa! Tezla actually thanked some one! And it was the drivers non the less!

Keep up the great work!
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 8 . 7/24/2008
yay, now a race. you're missing some commas, you need to go through and see where a comma might be needed.
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
gut gut...more info there. oh, Karma, how you annoy me so...yeah, i don't like her, for no actual apparent reason! oh racing, how i love you.
ChaoticEquipoise chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
omg! the suspense is killing me! i love this story i want to read the next chapter now!

Jimmy Candlestick chapter 6 . 7/12/2008
aww, Taro's being nice. ah, Monkey...does he not realize that he and Lani will never be?
august child chapter 6 . 7/12/2008
Oh yeah their gonna race! What was in the black bag?

Man can't wait to see Wylde in action! THis should be good. Keep up the great work!
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 5 . 7/10/2008
oh dear...Tezla's...being Tezla...
ChaoticEquipoise chapter 4 . 7/9/2008
what? i was reading and then out of the blue the chapter ended! what is that, rae? i'm already dieing for you to update again...
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 4 . 7/9/2008
is they gonna find Vert? of course Karma develops an awesomy car.
Dragon Reverb chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
i thought this is chose your challenge?
Jimmy Candlestick chapter 3 . 7/8/2008
you ought to have more information in does seem kinda...informationless...i never thought of Markie having an even worse attitude after the Drones...*gazes off into the distance thoughtfully*
august child chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Man I am so glad that someone is starting another story! This sounds like a great beginning! keep up the great work!
ChaoticEquipoise chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
i like it so far (i hope someone dies...)
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