|Reviews for The Final Challange|
| Dubious Writings chapter 9 . 7/26/2008
Nice job. You got some spelling mistakes and some un past tenses. It doesn't matter though. I get loads of spelling mistakes... Keep updating dude...I mean dudette...
| august child chapter 9 . 7/25/2008
Yes! Big racing stuff! Keep up the great work!
| august child chapter 8 . 7/25/2008
Whoa! Tezla actually thanked some one! And it was the drivers non the less!
Keep up the great work!
| Jimmy Candlestick chapter 8 . 7/24/2008
yay, now a race. you're missing some commas, you need to go through and see where a comma might be needed.
| Jimmy Candlestick chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
gut gut...more info there. oh, Karma, how you annoy me so...yeah, i don't like her, for no actual apparent reason! oh racing, how i love you.
| ChaoticEquipoise chapter 7 . 7/22/2008
omg! the suspense is killing me! i love this story i want to read the next chapter now!
| Jimmy Candlestick chapter 6 . 7/12/2008
aww, Taro's being nice. ah, Monkey...does he not realize that he and Lani will never be?
| august child chapter 6 . 7/12/2008
Oh yeah their gonna race! What was in the black bag?
Man can't wait to see Wylde in action! THis should be good. Keep up the great work!
| Jimmy Candlestick chapter 5 . 7/10/2008
oh dear...Tezla's...being Tezla...
| ChaoticEquipoise chapter 4 . 7/9/2008
what? i was reading and then out of the blue the chapter ended! what is that, rae? i'm already dieing for you to update again...
| Jimmy Candlestick chapter 4 . 7/9/2008
is they gonna find Vert? of course Karma develops an awesomy car.
| Dragon Reverb chapter 2 . 7/9/2008
i thought this is chose your challenge?
| Jimmy Candlestick chapter 3 . 7/8/2008
you ought to have more information in this...it does seem kinda...informationless...i never thought of Markie having an even worse attitude after the Drones...*gazes off into the distance thoughtfully*
| august child chapter 1 . 7/7/2008
Man I am so glad that someone is starting another story! This sounds like a great beginning! keep up the great work!
| ChaoticEquipoise chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
i like it so far (i hope someone dies...)