Reviews for Faces of the Moon
Vicks111 chapter 15 . 7/26/2009
The Hat!

I can't stop picturing Touya and The Hat. It was subtle, but it was there, the connection. I see what you are doing there with Osaka Joe and Jade Platter :3

Lovely story, great non-stream fic, it was refreshing.
DaisyNinjaGirl chapter 15 . 5/21/2009
Are you going to call the sequel "The Wham Bam Adventures"?

So... the five times Sakura wasn't there:

1. Tou and Mei Hua

2. Tommy Archer in Coventry

3. Library porn

4. Miss Evelyn Moongrass

5. Wham Bam Adventures

Well done!
Vicks111 chapter 13 . 4/1/2009
aww, its sad to know it's going to end soon. Still, its an awesome story. It'd be interesting to know how from all this personalities that are part of Yue, Yukito comes off all sweet and nothing like his predecessors. I know it's deluded or something, or maybe Yue just wasnt really paying attention with Yuki XD

I do hope that we get a YuexTouya epilogue, since the story is tagged for the two.
DaisyNinjaGirl chapter 13 . 4/1/2009
Another one so soon? You are a writing machine. :-)

Bit of trivia - I think they used to call the Seventh Form the Upper Sixth for some weird reason - don't know why.
DaisyNinjaGirl chapter 4 . 3/31/2009
""I hate you," said Tou, but very quietly, because his sister was laughing."

I'm rereading this, and I can remember a longer bit about the laughing here, which I liked, and miss in the revised version.
butterflydreaming chapter 11 . 11/16/2008
You're a bit cracked, aren't you? Well, this is entertaining. Frequently hard to follow. I'm charmed by the bits of this and that that make it up, and would like to see them glued together more firmly. Thanks, nevertheless. If you have more, I'll read more.

Quibble: soccer? Or "football"?
butterflydreaming chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
LOL, excellent. OC characters (to come), historical setting, references that may or may not be to Stephenson... your story has caught my interest.

I am entertained by seeing Touya call Clow an ass. While I adore CR, he most definitely was an ass.
DaisyNinjaGirl chapter 11 . 10/17/2008
Baby chickies. Baby Chickies!

Unfortunately for me, I saw a film clip while playing Sid Meier's Alpha Centauri of enormous quantities of baby chickies having their necks snapped and being shunted into a meat grinder. It's one of those images that I'd really like to erase.

(This is Steph, although I feel you would have already guessed it from the name.)
Zuzanny chapter 11 . 9/27/2008
I'm glad you have notes at the end of this chapter. I'm afraid I still didn't quite "get" it till then. How did Kero end up in the school with Yue anyway?

The Velveteen Rabbit was one of my faves as a kid! *.*
Vicks111 chapter 10 . 9/21/2008
oay to scare the readers, Yue! XD

And you are right, Clow had...problems. In a few words, the man was crazy.

Clow: Ha, crazy like a fox! Right, Yuuko dear?

Yuuko: you steal my line and my liquor, you four-eyed demon!

Oohh, Keroberos Dialogues sound very interesting!
Ex-Shark-Virtue-005 chapter 8 . 9/13/2008
you're right about the word n'est-ce pas, it does mean "not so" or "is it not". Great story keep it up.

K.F.1
Vicks111 chapter 9 . 9/9/2008
aww, that was sweet! Osaka Joe's story seems like a fun one, and it will be very interesting once you get there (I mean, how DID Kero get out of the book? And how much has he talked about Clow already?)

Again, great chapter! _
Vicks111 chapter 8 . 9/8/2008
.awesomeness!

I liked him. A lot. I love this!

I'm all out of broken sentences. I'm also pretty sure he can be wicked and mean when he wants to, much like Ruby Moon. It just gets portrayed so little, that everyone forgets. Much like we all forget that if you are not family or Yukito, Touya is pretty much a jerk to everyone else (barely kind when he is working :P)

Poor Jay, but at least he didn't die. I'm wondering if he realized that Julian was not his brother in that last line (I think he meant to ask if his brother had died, but the first thing that came to me was realization)

Oh, and that implication of why the groceries were taking too long...XDD
Zuzanny chapter 9 . 9/8/2008
Next bit please! :)
Zuzanny chapter 8 . 9/6/2008
Still enjoying this fic. I look forward to the next part. :)
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