|Reviews for The Denarian Lord|
| Guest chapter 24 . 3/10
| albus dumbles chapter 10 . 11/15/2020
charity is just ungrateful, maybe kill her, her son too. You can be g.r.r martin
| albus dumbledore chapter 5 . 11/15/2020
Loved that you insulted chinese. If you can insult korean, japanese and british too , you will get a cookie.
| albus dumbledore chapter 1 . 11/15/2020
loving the mc. But cant you give us some lemons.
| Vl4k chapter 36 . 10/26/2020
Thank you! It was a really great journey!
| FractiousDay chapter 36 . 9/5/2020
Read this trilogy over the course of a few days. While I’ve certainly enjoyed parts of it in other places it feels just underdone. The plot is frequently ponderous and the constant array of new enemies without any significant differences becomes tiresome. Good job for completing it, and I’ve no complaints about the technical writing, it just seems quite underdone
| FractiousDay chapter 10 . 9/4/2020
I think it’s this sort of thing that makes it so crude. Having the characters remark ‘hohoho I keep having to save the carpenters’ doesn’t actually subvert you writing the same thing out again and again. You have these either new characters or established ones who’ve been levelled up come along and dance around a bit and then you do it all again. There’s a static nature to the stories which is rather dull. In some parts it’s quire amusing, and I’ll admit I’m interested to see what happens, but that doesn’t resolve the issues
| FractiousDay chapter 7 . 9/4/2020
While these books are fairly entertaining you do have a rather, well, crude way of writing. I don’t particularly mind the swearing but no one changes and everything seems to remain static throughout the stories. You’ve never put Harry in a situation where he has to grow because he’s vulnerable because he can always go swinging his dick around. It gets boring, it’s just a little silly
| ArkhCthuul chapter 9 . 8/30/2020
No it does, because it's the order of the Blackened denarius.
The order you're flabbing about doesn't exist.
Sorry, that permanent mistake is really like a sore toenail, given the otherwise good to great quality...
| ArkhCthuul chapter 6 . 8/30/2020
Buuut the Blackened order part is getting on my nerves.
It's the Order of the Blackened denarius, not the blackened order of the denarius.
| steve malenchak chapter 13 . 8/15/2020
Poop amd poop
| infernofield108 chapter 2 . 6/8/2020
interaction between some of the order and the Phoenix doesn't quite make sense, they're almost acting like they've never met him when some of them have, not a huge inconsistency but if you find the time to plug that up I think it would shore up the chapter a bit more
| StonerMcWeedPot chapter 36 . 2/16/2020
All around good story. I really enjoyed this one. Is this at all connected to The Denarian Renegade? I’m wondering if I should go back and read that before reading the sequel to this. Or are the two stories similar but separate.
| quacker chapter 36 . 1/12/2020
INcredible. Probably the best fanfic i have read
| Rogue Survivor chapter 30 . 8/31/2019
A light was switched on... at Hogwarts... where there is no electricity. Alright.