Reviews for May
Pokemon Trainer Josiah chapter 1 . 7/29/2013
you need serious help man
Brianna Summers chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
I'm gonna go cry in a dark corner now. That was too sad :( But well-written and a fantastic idea. Good job. Even if it made me cry.
HUGE pokefan chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
I haven't cried this much since the story fallen rose petals. :'( So sad, but so good. *cries like crazy*
AriMax98 chapter 1 . 3/3/2009
Oh gosh...one of the saddest stories I've read. Da** that Brendan Bi*! He's a f*ing reta**! Brendan killed May AND the baby, (poor thing) and Drew. Drew did suicide which only made it sadder. :( Nice though.
A Moments Hesitation chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
wow that was sad.
LiahLozzah chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
soaringdragon43 is wrong. Everone has an opinion, if you wantto bash brendan, go nuts! Personally, i'm a harley basher myself!

Exellant story, very heartfelt from Drew's POV. I can't wait top readmore from you!

Lia...x
Princessdarkfairy chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
That was so sad *cries*. I really mean it,

oh poor May and poor Drew and the baby...

That was really good you're story it really got in my heart...
Azure Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
BRENDAN BASHING FAIL.
Wildshadow chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Poor May, poor Drew. He lost the one thing that was most important...this is really sad but it was written most exelently.