Reviews for What A Nutter Of A World
Laverne Hayes chapter 22 . 11/2/2014
Why was that rated R?
Dagger-Seishin chapter 27 . 7/6/2013
Lol ur kinda felt rushed toward the end t well done otherwise.
ceolwen chapter 11 . 2/16/2012
Quite a good story thus far. I am struck by a few grammatical issues - hope you are still reading these reviews and will take the time to correct these. (Ordinarily, I wouldn't bother, but it IS a good story and worth polishing):

Your vs. you're

Your is the possessive. You're is a contraction of you are.

Examples:

So, "You're a good writer" is correct (vs "Your a good writer.")

And "Your cat attacked me" is correct (vs "You're cat attacked me.")

Almost everywhere these occur, you reverse them!

Second issue:

Would of / could of / should of

These should be "would have / could have / should have"

Pronunciation kinda sounds like "of", making this a common mistake.

These two changes would definitely go some ways to polishing this story!
rainfall1310 chapter 9 . 1/29/2012
Haha I knew he was her cat. It hit me about halfway through chapter four. It was clever, i liked it.
purefaith91 chapter 27 . 11/29/2011
Really good and very original story. Your stories always make me think, although sometimes I wonder where you would have taken the character when you probably leave it unsaid so that we can make up our own minds. Would have liked to see Harry (and/or Severus and Hermione) take a more active part in Teddy's life so that it would make a difference. And would have been nice to mention Dudley's kid again once he was in school. A very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing. p
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 27 . 8/11/2009
Great story! :) Enjoyed it very much.
Megan Consoer chapter 27 . 11/1/2008
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 26 . 10/18/2008
huhn?
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 23 . 10/18/2008
sweet, you made Dudley nice! YIPPIE! (hes not all bad, he was raised spoiled)
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 14 . 10/18/2008
i love it when Harry plays catmaker (looness, my friend told me to put that in. Annie: HI!)
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 12 . 10/18/2008
thats really kinda sweet. i think thats another reason why Snape doesnt like Harry is becase hes lilly and JAMES son, not his and lillys. its kinda sad/cute ya know?
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 10 . 10/18/2008
i like his mom.
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 9 . 10/18/2008
but i thought she kinda liked Severus even as a headmaster
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 6 . 10/18/2008
lol! thats funny, but who is te girl? just a minor MINOR character, or will she be part of the story later on? hm, the world may never know!
IAmJustAFicReader chapter 4 . 10/18/2008
SNAPE IS THE ANIMAGI! I KNEW IT I KNEW IT I KNEW IT! Bwahahahaahhaahhahaha!
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