Reviews for Dawn of a New Age
Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
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ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
A great story. Very good.
RabidReject chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Interesting. More soon.
WBH21C chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Great start!
TheDon1023 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
damn thats sad as hell
stickzx chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
You need to read over your work you make very small mistakes that really makes the quality of the story go down.

Also you use your tenses wrong. Instead of "Xander was standing" use "Xander stood". Once you learn to do that it's gravy.
Bobboky chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
cool