|Reviews for Dawn of a New Age|
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/11/2013
| TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
A great story. Very good.
| RabidReject chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Interesting. More soon.
| WBH21C chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
| TheDon1023 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
damn thats sad as hell
| stickzx chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
You need to read over your work you make very small mistakes that really makes the quality of the story go down.
Also you use your tenses wrong. Instead of "Xander was standing" use "Xander stood". Once you learn to do that it's gravy.
| Bobboky chapter 1 . 6/30/2008