|Reviews for The Gift of the Zelendonii|
| Dennis chapter 20 . 5/28
It was a fine story and I thank you for sharing.
| Guest chapter 20 . 12/7/2016
Love love your work!
| big fan chapter 20 . 8/2/2016
I have read this story and Yannis and Amelia story many times to my enjoyment. Thank You
| Jeff chapter 20 . 4/13/2016
I just finished the second part,I enjoyed them both
The biggest difference is the vast scope of it story limits our knowing characters except ayla and jondalar.
The chsen thing is a little much for me not in idea but being transported and seeing loved ones far away... The first part with aylas family felt truer to source..but those are small complaints or critics, I enjoyed the story and it pulled me in,I also love that baby the lion has a part thanks, great read
| Guest chapter 20 . 8/9/2015
I truly enjoyed your imagination and story. I found it very entertaining, though I had trouble keeping some of the characters straight in my mind. I would love to read a updated version where the characters were a little more described at the beginning of the story line. To have so many new characters branched off from the original set was difficult to keep straight.
This is a wonderful story and if you wanted you could add much more depth and descriptions of the people and events and make it even better than the original
Congratulations you are very talented and I hope you continue to write
| Kerry chapter 20 . 2/21/2015
This was a good story next?
| Francis chapter 20 . 10/1/2014
thank you very much. I enjoy the reading
| Guest chapter 20 . 4/14/2014
Loved! Cant get enough of this story! Good job writing
| kagey chapter 20 . 10/14/2013
Jacquera, it was definately worth the writing. I, for one, got much enjoyment from reading it. Thank You.
| jante bostocks chapter 20 . 3/12/2013
enjoyed your story you have a good depth of understanding jean aeuls,earths enjoyed
the first three chapters and the last but you kept me reading till my eyes could not stay open.
i hope you keep on writing. LOVE AND BLESSINGS
| wendums chapter 19 . 2/27/2013
After reading this and other EC fics for second time I actually went to the library for the originals and I do much prefer these fics. A lovely, intersting and knowledgable read
| William RIley chapter 20 . 1/7/2013
I liked your story very much. Iwouldhave liked to see one more chapter to see what happened next. Is there more to come I hope so?
| Kagey chapter 20 . 1/4/2013
Definitely NOT dribble. An excellent continuation of the Earth's children saga.
| kagey chapter 20 . 11/26/2012
It was excellent. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks for writing it.
| kagey chapter 13 . 11/26/2012
I'm really enjoying your tale. Very interesting scenario and good cast of characters.