Not sure I agree with Snape giving Harry lines for not thinking about including Hermione.
I mean, why WOULD he? Snape's been very adamant about keeping everything very hush hush. How was Harry supposed to know that Snape wanted him to include her? He (unlike Snape) is not a mind reader.

Great fic. Awesome job.

Such a cute fic! I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing with us.

Really enjoying this fic so far! Ron is a good friend but a bit of an idiot here to not get the full story first. Very in character tho! I enjoyed his deviousness.

Ok i NEED more fics like this

Really a great story. I wish I were able to express my enjoyment more eloquently.

This is such a brilliant fic- you really are so talented. Your writing and word choice is perfect, every single time. I just love it! It’s really one of my favorite series- and I feel kind of dumb for commenting on it like, 13 years later, but well done. It is such a comfort piece. Thank you for gifting this to the world.

I loved the story and Ron is so accurately portrayed. And the ending was fantastic , asking for favorite type of biscuit

Bueno déjame decirte que esta muy interesante la historia, sigo revisando y te doy mi opinión si es que no te desagrada, te escribo en mi idioma original y lo copia con google traductor para ti; saludos

Well let me tell you that the story is very interesting, I keep checking and I give you my opinion if you don't like it, I write to you in my original language and I copy it with google translator for you; regards

I really loved this story! I realize you have probably left the story, but O want you to know I enjoyed it!

honestly, I don't think I've seen a writer handle Ron this well before

Lovely, just lovely. Thanks so much

this was awesome! i wish you'd write severitus just about Harry and Snape's relationship ( i always lacked a protective father figure so i love reading about them more than most). you really are incredibly talented!

Look this is quite possibly the best subversion of the Ron the Deatheater trope I've ever seen and it's amazingly hilarious. However is it really necessary to rub the reader's face in you spanking fetish quite this much? I mean everything is better in moderation but you just won't stop talking about it chapter after chapter. It's fine that you like spankings so much, but this level of fetishism without warning just comes off as uncomfortable for the reader.

Nice story. I enjoyed this a lot.