Bueno déjame decirte que esta muy interesante la historia, sigo revisando y te doy mi opinión si es que no te desagrada, te escribo en mi idioma original y lo copia con google traductor para ti; saludos

Well let me tell you that the story is very interesting, I keep checking and I give you my opinion if you don't like it, I write to you in my original language and I copy it with google translator for you; regards

I really loved this story! I realize you have probably left the story, but O want you to know I enjoyed it!

honestly, I don't think I've seen a writer handle Ron this well before

Lovely, just lovely. Thanks so much

this was awesome! i wish you'd write severitus just about Harry and Snape's relationship ( i always lacked a protective father figure so i love reading about them more than most). you really are incredibly talented!

Look this is quite possibly the best subversion of the Ron the Deatheater trope I've ever seen and it's amazingly hilarious. However is it really necessary to rub the reader's face in you spanking fetish quite this much? I mean everything is better in moderation but you just won't stop talking about it chapter after chapter. It's fine that you like spankings so much, but this level of fetishism without warning just comes off as uncomfortable for the reader.

Nice story. I enjoyed this a lot.

Not sure I agree with Snape giving Harry detention simply for not coming forward about being beat up. Poor judgement on his part sure, but he's never had anyone before to learn to trust in, that takes time. He didn't do anything wrong here other than panic.

oh no that is it. what a great story.

Awesome story and writing couldn't put it down.

Put a 2nd part up, u kinda left off at a strange part.

Wanted to enjoy it, but spanking apologism isn't my thing. Sorry.

That last line had me laughing. I did continue to wonder when she'd join and almost thought the 'complete' was an accident. Interesting take and I like that all three are mentored.

Omg the last part though. I actually imagined a cartoon snape hurling ron from the Astronomy tower.

I really wish this would have continued. I mean, you just brought Hermione into the story! Also, whatever happened with the “friendship” between Harry and Draco?