|Reviews for Return|
| Leesha Ray chapter 6 . 3/11/2009
This really is a great story! I can't wait to read more :o)
| latuacantante4him chapter 6 . 10/1/2008
I'm so glad she said yes. Charlie will just have to suck it up and deal. LOL!
| emmettsmyfave chapter 6 . 10/1/2008
you have to fake her death, it's one thing i missed in BD. but yay! bellas getting married!
| laughing bubbles 18 chapter 1 . 9/24/2008
i like! lol
| DontHoldBack09 chapter 5 . 9/20/2008
Ooh ooh ooh!
I'm so happy with the marriage twist! I can't wait for the reaction. I think it was kind of sudden, but Edward is sort of oddly sudden but decisive, so it works.
Are you planning on making Bella marriage-phobic, like in the books? Or are you going to have her be all sappy?
I think, if you want my input that is, that it'd be nice if she were resistant to marriage just yet.. that gives a great opportunity for Edward trying to woo/romance or seduce her.. both of which are always enjoyable to read about. :D
I can't wait for the next chapter!
| MickeyandMinnie chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
I love those two together! So sweet! Great chapter!
| I'm Randomspicuous chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
Say YES! but if she says no then she can be depressed and something BIG happens! i dont know... update soon!
| TeammJake chapter 3 . 9/17/2008
This is pretty good, I like it. I am writing a story that very similar, so it is interesting to read something close to what I have already written. The writing is very good, exspecially in the first chapter, but I do think it is a little bit rushed. Overall, really good.
| deletemeplease123 chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
dun dun dun
what shall she say
| deletemeplease123 chapter 4 . 9/17/2008
i love alice lol
| deletemeplease123 chapter 2 . 9/17/2008
| deletemeplease123 chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
the ending was adorable
| pricel chapter 5 . 9/17/2008
Nice proposal on his part.
| pricel chapter 4 . 9/17/2008
Great job with this.
| pricel chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
Well done so far.