Reviews for A New Recruit
Flint2008 chapter 4 . 5/23/2009
Really good story. This new character is very interesting. I like how he did save the others from disaster. However, this story did have a lot of spelling errors, missing words, and repeated words.

Otherwise, I like the concept, keep it up!
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 4 . 7/8/2008
Neat job!

Keep the good writing.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 3 . 7/4/2008
Precognition... cool one!

Keep the good writing.
Phoenix710 chapter 3 . 7/3/2008
That was really good, honestly. I like how Axel saved Exile, Colleen, and Hunter by using his power, and I really look forward to seeing the next chapter.
acosta perez jose ramiro chapter 2 . 7/1/2008
Nice story you have here.

Keep the good writing.
Phoenix710 chapter 2 . 7/1/2008
It's really good, and you got the dialogue just right. I liked the tour that everyone gave Axel, and how they all introduced themselves. You did a great job, and I'll be watching for the next one.
Phoenix710 chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Aside from a few spelling errors, it looks really good. One small detail, though...Colleen speaks with a thick Cockney (British) accent, so when she talks to Hunter, she calls him "Huntie"...or "Huntie-Wuntie", since she's quite deeply in love with him. Run your upcoming chapters through your spell-checker, and that should take care of the few errors. Other than that, it's a great beginning, and I look forward to seeing the rest of this story.