|Reviews for The Last Fire Lord|
| quietquiet chapter 42 . 1/24
Oh, you had me quivering with rage there towards the end! Loved the epilogue though :) made life better!
| Sailor Pandabear chapter 42 . 10/30/2015
| Totally Spazz-tastic chapter 42 . 9/23/2015
OH MY GOD. This is amazing. I cried buckets of tears over these last few chapters. Not gonna lie-I did NOT see you going Tokka there. :-D And Zutara, well-my Zutara detector was fluctuating. I couldn't decide if the necklace was Zuko's IOU reminder, or a reminder of Katara herself.
Ships aside, seeing Zuko turn himself into a scapegoat for the world brought many parallels to mind- Code Geass especially. And, actually, I would argue that THIS STORY inspired Vathara's famous "Embers" AND the ongoing "Jasmine" by Yorushike, with Jasmine being a more hurt/comfort version of the "martyr Zuko" plot.
| Lemniscato chapter 42 . 8/13/2015
I finally finished this story and I am so angry but I'm also happy. It's seriously hurting my chest. I don't think any story has been able to make me feel this way about words, but you managed to do it. I was thinking about this story for about an hour when I was trying to fall asleep (I stopped at chapter 37).
Zuko made me feel so much. I've never read a story where he's written like this. It's so mature but still with his dramatic side. I don't know if I love it or not, once again I'm conflicted. It's really well done, but I always want happiness for Zuko when I'm reading ATLA stories, so I feel like I'm betraying him a little when I say I liked how you wrote this.
But all in all, it's a masterpiece (aside from a couple of words mushed together in certain chapters, you didn't press space haha) and I'm strangely proud.
[Kinda sad that they didn't kiss, though.]
| The King in White chapter 42 . 5/22/2015
| Arquan chapter 42 . 5/19/2015
Great story. You made a very fine argument on how the White Lotus group had the ability to help but sat back and the world was pinning its hopes on a child
| Arquan chapter 35 . 5/19/2015
"I'm sorry for taking your pendant,I wish I could have given you one made by me" That line totally made me cry *sniffle*
| iRanNoodle chapter 42 . 3/8/2015
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/24/2015
:3 wow just wow love the chapter teheh
| esshven.surendran chapter 42 . 12/27/2014
Wow. That was epic
Loved the story
| YellowMonster360 chapter 42 . 11/16/2014
very good even better than 'your coming back' of bleach
| esshven.surendran chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
| iB3LIEVE chapter 42 . 9/3/2014
HOVAVOJPHAVOVJAVOJAVOVLJAPV *cries* SO CONFLICTED ABOUT THIS BUT YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING LOL
| iB3LIEVE chapter 41 . 9/3/2014
WHAT?! WHAT?! WHAT?!
| antoinettes chapter 42 . 6/18/2014
It's been a long time since a fan fic has made me cry, but this one succeeded in doing just that. It was very well thought out and addressed all the issues I realized I had with a bunch of kids saving the world when I did a recent rewatch of the series. Thank you for writing this. I really, really enjoyed taking the time to read it.