Reviews for Crazy Weird
Guest chapter 12 . 12/28/2015
please update soon this is really good
Guest chapter 12 . 12/26/2015
Please finish it!
RoniBopShop chapter 12 . 6/24/2015
I'm at the end, did you do the next chapter, I want to know what happens please :) chapter 12 . 5/10/2015
Can u plz continue wid this fic plzz i wanna no wa happends next and i luv this story wid a passion
miki chapter 12 . 1/22/2015
please do update this fic.. i really want to find out what will happen.. it so rare to find a good narusasu.. so please please please update..
OnceDeadTwiceShy chapter 12 . 11/5/2014
Seriously, the next chapter would be great. :-)
1000meredith chapter 12 . 9/15/2014
I really like this story so far and would really appreachate it if you could post the next chapter soon :)
and here are some faces for you: T/_\T O_\)
1000meredith chapter 11 . 9/15/2014
Damn thats funny
My Hopes and Dreams chapter 12 . 9/5/2014
Please update on this story soon. You don't read Sasuke turning into a female then gets pregnant all the time but I'll be waiting and hoping to read some lemons. Lol. Jaa ne
lyx-hime chapter 12 . 6/19/2014
ohh next pleaseee i love the story 3 pleaseeee !
DreamscomeTRUEEE chapter 12 . 5/25/2014
Next chapter is going to be long?
kymo chapter 1 . 5/13/2014
I love it! Please continue the story til the end. Not many authors do that now...
meaningfulusername chapter 12 . 11/24/2013
such a lovely story so far:)
DrunkUnicorn chapter 12 . 11/12/2013
I know I know this story hasn't been updated in years but I love this one :DD Do you want to update anytime soon? 0.0 :D
Guest chapter 12 . 7/23/2013
This is fabulous! I've been searching for an mpreg like this one for a long time. This fic is so much more sensible than the average mpreg. I hate when there's a big long explanation for how the guy got pregnant, so I thank you for avoiding the pseudo-science crap. I also like that there wasn't a bunch of drama with the pregnant guy running away from his partner as soon as he finds out about the pregnancy. (Why must that always happen? Why?) I like that Naruto has known from the very beginning, and that he was smart enough to figure it out about Sasuke having feelings for him. It saves us all from having to endure those very obvious things coming out later as "shocking revelations." And I like Naruto being a jerk about things because he's confused. That's pretty realistic, actually. Sakura turning into a good friend to Sasuke is a nice change of pace as well. I hate Sakura character bashing. She doesn't have to be a pink harpy every damn time, does she? I truly hope you get your inspiration back for this one some day.

My only bit of criticism for the fic is that I feel Naruto is falling for Sasuke too fast. By my calculations, after finding out Sasuke was pregnant, they spent a week or so avoiding one another, Naruto sort of tried being nicer, and then he got that mission and was gone for two weeks. Then suddenly when he gets back, we get a whole new Naruto who wants to go with the flow where Sasuke is concerned. It felt like the fic took a shortcut with his feelings there.

Naruto was a complete jerk during that week or so after Sasuke got pregnant. Sasuke was utterly miserable and Naruto was pretending he didn't hear him crying and wasn't seeing him getting thinner each day from the weight loss. Naruto's main reason for avoiding Sasuke that whole time is that he was freaked out over Sasuke being desirable despite being a man. He put his own fears above Sasuke's well-being! So that's why it's a little jarring for Naruto to go from callous to caring so quickly. Sure, he did a lot of thinking while he was gone, but the fic was pretty clear on the fact that Naruto didn't have any feelings for Sasuke before all this happened. So for him to suddenly be wondering whether or not he was in love was too much of a leap in thinking for Naruto to take. The best he could have done during that time period was to convince himself that being attracted to Sasuke as a woman isn't anything to be ashamed of. But Naruto went a step further and gave in to his urges with Sasuke, the urges he was so desperate to squash. And Sasuke as well. He's been afraid to make himself vulnerable to Naruto again.

As far as I'm concerned, Sasuke's objection that Naruto won't want him once he has a dick again is still valid. All of Naruto's sexual responses to Sasuke are based on his female form; there's been nothing about male Sasuke. Naruto missing Sasuke while he was gone is pretty natural because they were always together. A lot of his jealousy of Sakura can be blamed on that as well. She's done nothing to make herself into a love-rival. What she has done; however, is take Naruto's place as Sasuke's best friend, and she's doing a better job being Sasuke's supportive partner than Naruto is. It's Saskura that Sasuke is hanging out with and talking about the baby with. These are platonic things that Naruto is jealous of. Yet Naruto is treating it as he might be feeling something romantic.

I think it would have worked better for me if they'd regained their friendship first and started feeling comfortable with one another again on that level, rather than going straight to the hormones and Naruto asking Sasuke to sleep next to him in his bed. Would they have done something like that while Sasuke was still a guy? If it's something they wouldn't have ever dreamed of doing just a few weeks ago, then the fic is probably moving them too fast if they are doing it now. Right now, they've got hormones, yet they can't manage a conversation. This isn't relationship progress; it's a regression. They could talk to one another before all this, now they can barely say two words to one another without arguing. That's not a positive step forward. It's not a good situation to start growing romantic love from.
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