Reviews for Desolation and Retribution
JMaire chapter 15 . 6/27/2010
I wish she'd make him work for it. She has to live with the fact that he slept with someone else. And he doesn't even appear to regret it that much.
JMaire chapter 14 . 6/27/2010
I'm sorry. This is STUPID. Why would Alice stop her from KILLING that sow? Why would Bella feel GUILTY? She's a THREAT to the family. That's just dumb.
Ant chapter 15 . 7/28/2009

I Really Loved This Story,

And Judging By The Last Update, Date, Which Was Almost A Year Ago, This Story Proabably Wont Be Continued. Which Is A Shame.

This Story Is Very Captivating And I Love Your Writing Style!

I Noramlly Get Anoyed With How People Portray Differant Characters, But I Think You Hounestly Caught Each Of Their Personalitys Well!

I Think This Story Deffinatly Deserves More That 80 Something Reveiws, So I Am Adding Mine. (Which I Dont Normally Do.)

Please Concider Continuing Writing This Story, I Think It Will Be Well Worth It.

Thanks x
Smoovh chapter 6 . 4/2/2009
Awesome story! Please keep writing!
vampiregurl chapter 15 . 1/2/2009
whoa is there going to be a war?
teambellaedward chapter 15 . 9/28/2008
So cool can’t wait for next update
LaurynCullen chapter 6 . 9/7/2008

i'm totally loving this story!

:]] I'm hooked.
James Is a British Name chapter 14 . 8/31/2008
Breaking Dawn actually wasn't very happy making when you read it, but, if you read it a second time I'm sure that everyone would be happy. I haven't read it a second time but, I was only dissapointed with it because it had a child in it. I still don't think they should have put her in the story. ALSO, I'm sure that by the time the fourth Twilight comes out on the big screen we'll all understand why did what she did.

(P.S. She can still write more you know!)
shy-baby-2007 chapter 15 . 8/13/2008
i really like this story please keep writing, love it
mamato chapter 15 . 8/13/2008
Your story is, as always, great! I can't wait for the next chapter, so please update as soon as you can! Also, will Bella's insecurities ever come up again due to Edward's "unfaithfulness"?
xxxxParvati-Patilxxxx chapter 15 . 8/13/2008
I'm glad that Edward and Bella have worked through the majority of their problems. I loved this chapter, please update again soon.
My-Edward-1992 chapter 15 . 8/13/2008
thank you for updating! :)
Erin chapter 14 . 8/7/2008
I have read a ton of these fan fics and not once have I felt the need to send a message, even on the good ones. This story is great and has kept me up until two in the morning reading when I should be in bed preparing for another day of chasing around a one year old and 6 year old while pregnant. Please keep up with the story and don't make us wait too long. It really is wonderful.

As for Breaking's a different style of writing for her and there are some leaps that don't make sense but after reading it a few times, it's good. Don't get too caught up in it and forget YOUR fans...I am waiting quite impatiently for your next chapters.

crysta656 chapter 14 . 8/5/2008
Great story! Keep writing!
Batman4eva chapter 14 . 8/4/2008
it was awesome at first i had to make sure i was actually readin the book and not a fanfiction lol i think that the jacob fans can b happy about this and what happens to him

damn i hope im not givin anything way!

great chap 1 question... r bella and edward gonna settle this whole mess cause we need some b and e fluff here lol

update soon please!
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