Reviews for Kuroi Kaze: Fuujin's chosen
Jo chapter 13 . 1/28/2016
Good, really good.
Bochord of Leaspell chapter 9 . 5/8/2015
Because obviously Sasori has to stab SOMETHING with his wood...
HalfwayParanoid chapter 13 . 6/24/2013
dragomeir chapter 12 . 4/24/2013
loved this take on the wave mission, completely origonal just like the rest of your story. Naruto is still naive though kinda odd such a great ninja can still be that way.
Knight of elves chapter 13 . 10/22/2012
I liked your story a lot. Please keep up the good work. Post as fast as possible.
ShadowFireZelda chapter 2 . 10/5/2012
A steed is a horse. I think you meant stead.
Battle neurosis chapter 12 . 12/26/2011
Thats a hellish good of a fic. The fic was so yammy. I ate it. It tasted so delicious. I want more delicious chapt. Get it, my chef?
daniel 29 chapter 10 . 12/13/2011
The omakes are interesting also gives people something to ponder
Lokiethegod chapter 1 . 5/14/2011
i like your take on the medacal staff and your right the oath makes them have to help naruto even if they hate him
ruhiko chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
The Forest of Health part was so FUNNY~~! O
Cloves chapter 13 . 2/1/2011
Like it.
all forms of fluff chapter 13 . 1/12/2011
The first thing that comes to minde when reading this story, Airheaded dude, is that the gramar is awful. Your spelling is impecable as far as I can tell but you seem to repete parts of sentences, also switching pronouns and tences. I devoted a large part of my time reading your story trying to decifer what it was you were trying to say. Now, that being said, on to the good part. I really enjoyed the story so far. The plot up till now seems to be well thought out, the charter development is pregressing at a slow pace but then the major players in Naruto's life did just get all kinds of power ups. Though I think Sasuke is going to need some armor to absorb the lightning chakra that seems to be out of controle, much like the jagan users oponient in the dark tournment needed. The only draw back I can see for you is that Naruto is basicly walking about with his god mojo leaking all over people, this could be both a boon and a disaster to your story, whith the time he puts in with random people hell just having him in town is going to alter every one in konoha. So I say bewear of such things in the future. I personaly would have liked it if the demon brothers were killed and Sasuke wound up with the gun gauntlent and Sakura with the windmill. Heck you could have given all of team 7 new weapons, Kakashi gets a zanbato and Naruto gets a blood dager made of ice. Well those last two are just for shits and giggles, but sasuke shooting would could be called miny lightning rods and Sakura having a long ranged weapon that used persice chakra control ... you coulda for got the power up viea 'god juice' that way. Well I'm out of here you have a good story, if you had a beta it could be better, but either way if you come back to this story dont let my negitiave thoughts bring you down; becasue if your having fun... then what dose it matter what I say? :D
lisettesakura chapter 13 . 11/20/2010
I really really liked the that you will update soon
LunarCatNinja chapter 13 . 6/18/2010
LOVE the story, and I hope you update it soon! W
bakapervert chapter 13 . 6/16/2010
This remind me of Ichigo's influence to his friend. When are you gonna continue this?
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