Reviews for Angelinus
silverbirch chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I'm still girding mu loins to tackle Book 1, so I shall park this in the usual place!
Jiapa chapter 2 . 7/1/2008
Lovely start. I like the set up a lot; I'm looking forward to seeing Severus deal with (and fight) the werewolf restrictions, and to seeing both Severus and Remus deal with a pair of 5 year olds. 8)
Zarathustra46 chapter 2 . 7/1/2008
Ok, I found two errors I didn't catch - dang it all!

1: “Oh wow,” Jenny Bones said in wide eyed amazement. “Old Snape had a temper on tonight!”

Should be 'has a temper'

2: and I have really strong, if crooked teeth!”

there needs to be a comma after crooked.

Wait - I don't feel so bad, Nathan missed them too. LOL

Love ya!

Zara
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