|Reviews for A Dark End and a Bright Beginning|
| Cocopop55 chapter 19 . 4/10
No! Plz update this! The HitsuHina moment completely broke my heart and I just can't deal with it! TTTT I feel like crying
| daniela chapter 19 . 4/1/2012
please write more!
| NickyDawn chapter 19 . 12/16/2010
pls. update the story becos' i love it
| Ogure Michiyo chapter 19 . 12/12/2010
Is there going to be more chapters?
| CMinuteByMinute chapter 19 . 11/29/2010
LOL, you evil, confusing person! Oh, well... Brilliant story, nice job on the characters, good writing. Update, please:)
| Noeyyy chapter 2 . 11/27/2010
oh...i see a catastrophe brewing... matsumoto and inoue (facepalm)
GAH! i'm still anxious for when karin dies T-T
| Noeyyy chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
First chapter and it rocks. The toshiro and matsumoto scene was perfect. I know you had to get hitsuhina out of the picture but I was like awwwww when u said she liked Kira and hitsugaya mved on. Omg I still have to brace myself for when Karin dies cuz sheesh I can feel I'll be devastated. Anyway, I'll keep reading later. Good stuufffff
| InARealPickle chapter 14 . 7/25/2010
Completely and utterly random. This chapter makes no sense at all.
| InARealPickle chapter 10 . 7/25/2010
You just got finished saying in a past chapter that Nami was the little girl that Ichigo left flowers for.
It's simply not possible that she was already living with Granny when Toushiro moved in.
Toushiro is like 120 years old, and he was already a captain at the beginning of the manga - which was BEFORE Nami was sent to Soul Society.
I'm not going to bother picking the rest of your plot apart...
Let's just leave it at -
I find it very difficult to believe that in 4 years time, Ichigo never met Lando.
And I find it even harder to believe that once he met Lando that he wouldn't recognize that Lando was a hollow.
| InARealPickle chapter 4 . 7/25/2010
"He's 5'5", making him above the average height of an elementary student,..."
No, 5'5" is NOT the average height of even the eldest of elementary students.
I'm 5'5", so out of curiosity I looked the statistics up years ago.
5'5" is the average height of an American female.
There's no way that a Japanese elementary school student is even 5' tall.
If you wanted to take the time to make your details factual (and therefor bring some realism to your story) you could look up the average height for males and females of different age groups. It's easy to find this stuff online.
| hitsukarinluvr chapter 19 . 7/24/2010
not confused... hehehe YAY!
| AlwaysRunning9 chapter 19 . 7/22/2010
AWESOME! xD yay shes gettin her memories back! kind of. haha
| PrussiaRox chapter 19 . 7/22/2010
Please update soon.
| PoleDancerWannaBe chapter 19 . 7/22/2010
I LOVE your story . !
Hey ! Sry to ask you that but, what is the english word for "suite" plz ?
PS : I'm french ""
I can't wait the "suite" xD
| Turtle-chan in Blue chapter 19 . 7/21/2010
i liked karasu better. so much more down to earth. and now she's replaced by this karin person D: