|Reviews for Scorching Heat|
| Vulcan Rider chapter 12 . 10/9/2010
Absolutely wonderful story. I was thrown a bit by Ranger's backstory, but then realized that this story was written back during the earlier books. I've always thought there was more to Frank than met the eye. You did him justice. I loved seeing Ranger and his men intimidated by his status.
As for the grammar, etc. I found many words that didn't really work right in the context of the story, but figured out what you meant and the words you were trying to think of. Even though English isn't your first language, I believe you did a very, very good job on it. Also, the suspense of the story, and the detail worked beautifully to create a wonderful story, full of all the necessary items that make a story go from good to great.
Thank you for sharing your work with us.
| bgrgrmp chapter 12 . 6/28/2010
I didn't realize charming the wizard was .hot!hot!hot!I am going right now to check out the redt of your stories
| bgrgrmp chapter 11 . 6/28/2010
| bgrgrmp chapter 2 . 6/28/2010
I can feel steph and rangers pain.i am rereading this story...i love it
| mssmith chapter 12 . 8/24/2009
Really good story, loved it. Now...what the hell is with the cucumber? You can't just leave it like that! Thanks for the great story babe.
| dancingpiggy chapter 12 . 7/30/2008
urg! i still want to know what the fight was about! i bet steph wants to get a dog or something ;P besides that great ending, i think the cucumber smashing was great!
| x3myheartbeat chapter 12 . 7/28/2008
haha love it.
| victorianchic105 chapter 12 . 7/28/2008
Congratulations! It was wonderful, can't wait to read what you post next :)
| Night script chapter 12 . 7/28/2008
whoa... lol... the cucumber is gone... lol...
| x3myheartbeat chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
| dancingpiggy chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
AW! awesome chapter, i like how you had frank go in first
now hurry up and write that epilogue, i want to now what the cucumber had to do with anything! ;D
| victorianchic105 chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
very well done. thank you so much for sharing this story with us!
can't wait to see what you come up with next :) hehe
| wanttowrite chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
Wonderful last chapter. A very entertaining story!
| Night script chapter 11 . 7/25/2008
OMG... It is the ending already... Only a chap to go... *sigh* I'll miss this story... made me cry and broke my heart... I love it...
| Night script chapter 10 . 7/23/2008
OMG... Love it... they are so close already... wow... you made me cry... which is good... so emotional... i love it... update soon... would love to read more...