My first review, but this chapter had me in honest tears.

Beautiful and touching.

Another well written story, Lady Scribe. You know how to keep one riveted. This is one I have read more than once and will read again. The sadness and tears wrung out in some of the chapters is amazing. I feel that you have a real talent in writing these stories. I thank you for sharing them. I hope that you will not lose your muse or inspiration with the death of David Bowie. To me no one else is or could be The Goblin King.

It took me two days to read this due to real-world obligations, and it was so hard to stop! I kept thinking "I'll just read to the end of this chapter and the stopping point will be less interesting than this chapter"...and before I knew it I would be two more chapters ahead. It was (as always!) well-written and this time extra emotional as well; I cried when Karen died.
I can't believe how much French my brain retained from high school! I only had to look up a few words. It's such a pretty language :)
Amazing work!

Few spelling mistakes, but as usual, you spin a great yarn. I love your work! :3 please keep writing!

Oh my goodness you are awesome!

So a small critique:
You seem to have a problem with differentiating homonyms. Or misspelling certain words that are close enough.
For example:
Quiet-silence
Quite- "that's quite enough"
Sometimes you put quite where quiet belongs

Or:
Bear feet vrs bare feet
the story changes a bit when I say she had bear feet doesn't it?

You also consistently misspell definitely as 'defiantly'.
You are a fantasies writer and I know if you watch out for these problems you'll be even better.

definitely needs a sequel o

Wow, I really do love your Labyrinth fics. I also love how you put bits of your Celtic trad in here! Praise Danu 3
This fix made me really want to take up fencing! And ah! How I wish Jareth was my martial arts Master! *swoon*
Poor Sarah….

Please have a sequel!

This is a nice story.

But..
I needs a beta. There are some mistakes that dim the pleasure of reading it. (e.g. tale/tail)

Thank you for sharing!

This was such a fun read! Thx so much for sharing.

Beautiful story though I wish there had been more time for romancing. The drama was well done however and the story pleasing.

Do you know I might be addicted to your stories? I have two more lined up in my browser ready to start attacking fervently. I thought this was great, although I admit that the final chapters depicting Karen's death were very upsetting for me and I was reminded of the death of my own mother. I cried for about half an hour after reading that.

Loved the appearance of Daisy and Della in this one too - albeit as creatures different to how they are in Hurts Like Hell. You obviously invest a lot of time in creating your character backgrounds and histories of the Fae families that you've created and that's dedication at it's best. Thanks for another great read.

I am both ecstatic and sad its over! This was an amazing read and an awesome tale! Great job!

Its official . . . I'm balling, lol