Reviews for It was Heaven, Right Smack in the Middle of Hell
Too lazy to sign in P chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
AW! I was crying in the middle and cracking up at the end.

It was like we hadn't died at all. We were human. We were in love. We were laying in the grass of our meadow.

I wouldn't trade this for anything.

It was heaven.

"Hey, what the hell is this place?" a familiar voice suddenly said.

Edward and Bella's eyes widened at the voice.

"JACOB?"

LOLS! Haha! You're amazing! (:

WRITE MORE!
verizon dark 13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
this story is amazing. although i am not a fan of jacob and bella together i really enjoyed this. i cried during this story that is one of the truest qualities a writer can give the story. you have a gift for writing. amazing story i look forward to reading everythig else you have writen.
Yuki-chanX3 chapter 1 . 1/3/2010
LMAO. I love you and your writing.
SparklingStar25 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
That was beautilful...

n the ending was hilarious..lolzz
I DO NOT WRITE ANYMORE chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
jez.

that was beautiful

i cried :(

and then i laughed at the end :P

AMAZING

BEAUTIFUL

i applaud you.
tite-lilith chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
AMAZING except the part where Jacob comes at the end lol

Why is he here with them? lol ARGH! lol

I love it!

Great OS!
askjifk chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
aw (in a way to say "i cant fuckin belive it!) jacob has to ruin everything...tipical dog thing to do, i swear you get something new and then sudenly its stained and the dogs no where in sight...not saying i have a dog...no i wouldnt be able...anyway...LOVE THIS...i couldnt stop reading, i almost cried...please make it into a story!please!
Jess the Weird chapter 1 . 11/30/2009
WOAH

That was just... WOAH!

There are no other words to describe it.

I absolutely love it, I think it would be good if you turned it into an actual story, or at least a two shot where Jacob goes 'cause e just kinda RUINED it!

Sorry

It's just that I'm Team Edward all the way!
boomboom chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
:)) What a cliffhanger! :
goodbye123456789 chapter 1 . 8/25/2009
ahahahahah the ending was hilarious. totally something jake would say.
Jada Lentz chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
I love it. It's almost as good as the books. *,..,*
Justcurious8 chapter 1 . 7/9/2009
WOW Great story! LMAO the ending was pretty hilarious!

Much Love,

Emelie
TheRestIsUnwritten18 chapter 1 . 6/22/2009
I loved that, it was so sweet

-bella
JAMIE chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
THAT WAS GREAT! I LOVED THE ENDING!
tears will fall chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
amazing

where the bold song lyrics

if they were whats the song and whos it by

or is it a poem

you did a great job...

btw check my story out

xox
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