Reviews for Fast Food and Play Lands
breathlessnightxx chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
xD cute
Trust.But.Verify chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
OMG! LOL!
Anonamouse1 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
oh, yes, I've definitely been scared for life. (However, it's a Cullen scar, so it's a good thing!)
RiverX11 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
I had to cover my mouth so I didn't wake anyone up I was laughing so loud at the last line. You so need to do another chapter with them in the ball-pit LOL I loved this one allot!
Allegra.Jane.Alec chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
How the hell am I suppossed to study if you have such entertaining and amazing stories?
XSTARLESSCITY chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
That was bloody amazing.

The last line had me laughing for like...5 mintues.

Great Job!
TwilightSarah1414 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
lol, you should do another story with the ball-pit. too funny!
isacz chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
hahaha LOVE it! great job! :);):)
poofle13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
good story!
Alyssa Avenged chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
Lmao!

That was god.

Edward's silly.
LondonMarie chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
AWESOME!
Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
no no that be to much! omg!... oh please do it I think it would be really good please do more soon!
Rider Arya Svit-kona chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
haha It's cute. I like it. Totally awesome place to have sex. haha I can't wait to see what you come up with next!

Arya
NatallieRose chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
That was so funny! You should do the ball pit scene, it would be hilarious!
xDaisyMayx chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
wow, that was really good- very hot. i really loved it!
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