|Reviews for Fast Food and Play Lands|
| breathlessnightxx chapter 1 . 9/14/2008
| Trust.But.Verify chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
| Anonamouse1 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
oh, yes, I've definitely been scared for life. (However, it's a Cullen scar, so it's a good thing!)
| RiverX11 chapter 1 . 8/11/2008
I had to cover my mouth so I didn't wake anyone up I was laughing so loud at the last line. You so need to do another chapter with them in the ball-pit LOL I loved this one allot!
| Allegra.Jane.Alec chapter 1 . 8/10/2008
How the hell am I suppossed to study if you have such entertaining and amazing stories?
| XSTARLESSCITY chapter 1 . 7/24/2008
That was bloody amazing.
The last line had me laughing for like...5 mintues.
| TwilightSarah1414 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
lol, you should do another story with the ball-pit. too funny!
| isacz chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
hahaha LOVE it! great job! :);):)
| poofle13 chapter 1 . 7/13/2008
| Alyssa Avenged chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
That was god.
| LondonMarie chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
| Wildrose Sesshomaru chapter 1 . 7/9/2008
no no that be to much! omg!... oh please do it I think it would be really good please do more soon!
| Rider Arya Svit-kona chapter 1 . 7/8/2008
haha It's cute. I like it. Totally awesome place to have sex. haha I can't wait to see what you come up with next!
| NatallieRose chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
That was so funny! You should do the ball pit scene, it would be hilarious!
| xDaisyMayx chapter 1 . 7/6/2008
wow, that was really good- very hot. i really loved it!