Reviews for Fast Food and Play Lands
HoldOnTight28 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
This was absolutely fantastic.
Daring.Sorceress.of.the.Dark chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
AH! ballpits and those mat thing-y-s are forever scared!
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
MicheLLen chapter 1 . 7/1/2008

I'm both feeling bad AND extremely jealous for the little kids
Apple Slushie chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Oh my god! i'm never letting my sister go into those playgrounds again! LOL

ehehehehehehehe i loved the ending

down the slide
twilight-fedishfreak chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
lol/that was funny , at the end...
Miranda River chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I'm going to giggle every time I go past the McDonald's Playplace on the way to work. Thanks for the lemony goodness!
Purple with Irony chapter 1 . 7/1/2008


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Mezzanottex3 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I want to go to McDonalds all of the sudden... hehe.


But I don't have Edward so it won't be fun.

ANYWAY I loved how you wrote this. I laughed a couple of times, and I like when Edward was like:

"I felt like a fool crawling inside of a plastic tube behind her, but I wouldn’t complain. I had a great view anyway."

Hehe x3 Awesomeness!

sirodro chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
god that was delicous! I loved sick am I? It was adorably funny, and tantilzing ! I love how Edward thinks. His pov is my favorite. I saw this whole thing play out in my head like a was too good for words.

Thank you ever so much!

sylamesio123 chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
lol. so so so funny
tukatarina chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
I like it, it was interseting. Could you write another Bella and Jacob lemon? I like those the best. Maybe you should write one with Emmett and Bella. Hehehe, that would be one i'd love to see.
sweetheartboom chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Thanks to you, the next time I go to a McDonald's Play Place, I will look for some people doing something that they should be doing! O.o I loved this for some reason, it's so awesome.

Edward and Bella: Corrupting Several Children At A Time



Love your writing, Deidara's Model
AshFF chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
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