|Reviews for Fast Food and Play Lands|
| DelilahTCullen chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
damn, eddies horny.
i thot that was funny, very cool
| Sporkedd chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
you've scarred my mcdonalds plaything memories for life!
jk i loved this. write more lol
| nottragedi chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Good Lord Almighty. I now have a new kinky place to go in my mind with Edward.
| Erica -Practicemakesperfect chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
The ball-pit! yay!
| The Romanticidal Edwardian chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
| smilelikeacullen chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
okay so you should write the ball pit one too! and i also want to know what other place edward would like to take her, other than in the jungle gym, he said except one other place, i would love to know that, yes please! and i am dying for the mutual pleasing story for them both, i think it could be soo hott, and if written by you , i know it would be awesome! thanks a lot!
| Sheethkal Shahar chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
HAHAHAAHAHA, loved it, now that is hilarious. Nothing better then public places. Lol.
| three.hills chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
This is great, I recently started a discussion on imdb about strangest places to do it, for brainstorming a fanfic of mine, and a ball pit was suggested more than once! You're right, I can't really see Edward taking her there, but other than a few things the characterizations were pretty accurate. Or as accurate as they can be in an R rated Twilight fic.