Reviews for Rebellion
acetwolf94 chapter 13 . 11/17/2017
Begumebilli chapter 4 . 11/28/2014
Your characters are not making sense. Is Harry all powerful or is it his girlfriend? Why on earth Voldemort wants him so desperately? It's all very disjointed.
Guest chapter 4 . 4/17/2014
I kinda expected him to make a crack when Voldie first said padawan. Like the big bad muggle hater watches muggle movies
mkeeg91 chapter 13 . 4/28/2013
so amazing! I loved how this story ended.
great work!

Loved Morgan (and Alexis) so much!
My Alternate Reality chapter 13 . 1/20/2013
Great story
Whovian chapter 4 . 1/1/2013
Hey, um... I smell Mary sue, on Morgan. Just saying, k? Might not be, but she's an amazing gymnist,people love her,she's more powerful than Harry,who you claim to be superpowerful,intimidating,confidant,harry will do anything for her,and dominates over harry,who you've made him a witty smart Alec who won't awnswer to noone, except his girlfriend who he loves bordering on obsession, will do anything for her,and is no march for her amazing inceullect and skills. Yeah...

Can't set up Harry as a awesome super person who's top at everything and then make someone who's apparently to good to even try, -and she makes no effort and if she did, then she would be a gazillion tines more awesome, and even still, without trying, she still is way better.

And wouldn't it be good if she tried, as then Harry wouldn't get all ze attention from moldy shorts, so...stupid. Not you.

Now it's not that I'm outraged that a woman is more powerful than a man cause that's nor it! It's I came here to read a powerful Harry Fanfic, nit a powerful oc fic, ok?

Apart from her, I really like this story, but Harry needs to grow a pair and think for himself
Meow chapter 3 . 1/1/2013
I like Morgan, and your Harry, but the way he's practically obsessed with Morgan and 'needs' to be with her is kinda contradictory to his character. She seems to have this ego the size of America, so it can't be protection, and if it is, that's contradictory to her character, unless the ego and powerfulness and confidence and intimidation factor is a facade, but it hasn't said that. It seems to be not the case, as she's comforting and witty when we see her alone...

Now I'm a feminist, but it's just condradictory to their characters. It's okay to have equal confidence, a relationship isn't sorely built on one 'vunerable' one and one 'strong' one. Yes, in power level Harry probably beats her, but having match his temper and confidence with her own is OKAY!
Meow chapter 2 . 1/1/2013
Wow, Morgan's a stuck up selfish bitch who's been handed life and power on a silver platter...I like her...a lot!

Siriusly, great job. I like Harry's smartarsery (yeah that's a word) and the world you've created, great job guy!
xXxAngel-With-A-ShotgunxXx chapter 13 . 12/27/2012
I read this story in one sitting and absolutely loved it. Amazing.
jebbus132 chapter 13 . 12/21/2012

I don't know how to say this but this is awesome story!
TheBlackBook chapter 13 . 12/19/2012
Lovely story, though a little short.
We have similar taste in music :)
CrimsonAsh28 chapter 13 . 9/14/2012
Go team Harry!
But really? Minister at eighteen? Oh well, good for him.
Thank you,
CrimsonAsh28 chapter 4 . 9/14/2012
What with the era his mother would have grown up with, I'm surprised Harry didn't recognize the term padawan.
blake012 chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
1sunfun chapter 13 . 5/5/2011
Nice, interessting and original story.

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