|Reviews for Hell and Bad Luck|
| ebonypol chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Loved it :D
| Gucci Tracksuit chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
| Prexistence chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
excellent story, i wish the comics were like this.
| emmymae chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
This is a good idea for a story. However, there are some things I didn't like. I didn't like the part with Gambit having a personal vendetta on the X-Men and him beating them up and blowing up their plane. He's not that far gone I hope.
I also had some grammatical issues, like "Emma smirked, she knew about the mutant massacre." You need to make this flow better like saying 'Emma smirked as she thought about his involvement in the mutant massacre.' You also left out a personal pronoun or two and the possessive form. And sometimes the X on X-Men wasn't capitalized. In some places you should break up sentences into two or combine sentences into one.
The majority of it is pretty well-written.
| my1lilsecret chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
Very good :) I liked it and I too would like to see it continued :)
| Arian69 chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
that was really cool, please go on with writing legacy-based stories!