Reviews for The Deal
FalconLux chapter 1 . 5/23/2014
I liked it. And your mini-epilogue was much better than J. K.'s. Bravo!

P.S. The venus flytrap eating the dog made me giggle - as did Dumbledore's *sad* end.
JlovesGaara chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
Lol! Cute yet angsty, very well done.
Pyrane chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Thank you, I had a great time :D

ArtsyShan chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
I loved it. It was great. I especially liked the added bit at the end about Neville's family. Good job as always.
Lw117149 chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
lol very nice
EternalDreamerEnchanted chapter 1 . 5/28/2012
I likes that 15 kids poor hermionie Ron's a slacker
WereBunny87 chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
This had me giggling a lot! I loved it! Great job!
tinkita chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Great story!
CubsAndDoodles chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Is short, but I had a lot of fun reading it, no need for sequels, I like the part where it says Hermione had 15 children and was always angry because she dind't have time for research, :)
Alysisaacs17 chapter 1 . 10/9/2011
got to say aw about no sequal but i loved it the ending was haliorus. I liked the use of the game i never. and how the slytherins end up being the good guys

Thank you

Alys x
cethmistmyk chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
I feel no need for sequels, but the ending was rather abrupt...


I loved it though.
GotCinnamonPunkC13 chapter 1 . 8/8/2011

Brilliant, as always.

You should write more one shots, I cant read the others as fast as Id like.
The Ultimate Otaku chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
lol the ending was silly, true, but as for the rest, I loved it! it was believable, sweet, sad, interesting, etc. I loved the cottage bits, and the "I Never" game with the Slytherins.
Bobette13 chapter 1 . 6/15/2011
I had to laugh:

"...and had 3 perfect children and a dog. And a huge greenhouse. Their dog was eaten by one of the venus flytraps though."

I could actually see that happening, on the picture-perfect lawn near a window in the greenhouse (do they have windows?). Brilliant.

Cute little fic. Well, cute and melancholy, they balanced nicely.
slashslut chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
great fic!
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