|Reviews for Trying|
| Jane chapter 27 . 9/1/2013
This is a good story
| TWILIGHT OBSESSER 'N' WWE FAN chapter 27 . 11/15/2009
orr such a happy ending
| Bella Marie Cullen 213 chapter 1 . 10/9/2009
| AriesFireQn chapter 28 . 3/18/2009
I truly enjoyed reading this story and can't wait to read more of your writings.
| RawrEvaRawr chapter 28 . 1/23/2009
THat was amazing! love it going to read the sequel!
| Emmett's One True Love chapter 7 . 1/9/2009
Great story but y is a vampire taking drugs?
| James Savant chapter 28 . 12/22/2008
*insert your personal favorate evil laughter here* NICE!
| James Savant chapter 24 . 12/22/2008
In this part:
I smiled at them. They looked sweet, Father and Son together. Cliche' but very true. I'm glad that Haiden is now completely excepting of Edward. I'm just really happy that the twins are happy and love Edward.
I spotted a misspelled word excepting should be accepting
| elysium009 chapter 2 . 11/25/2008
Sorry-but your bad grammar is very, very distracting. I'm sorry but it really is...
| eclipseX chapter 18 . 8/17/2008
the story is really nice and i am starting to like the story more and more..
| Emo Fanpire chapter 28 . 7/25/2008
luved the story!
| Omnipotent One RPB 7 chapter 27 . 7/24/2008
Oh my god!
What is wrong with you? You really think people like this? I hope not, because that would mean that people are actually decreasing in their intelligence level.
Get your act together. There's no one in this fandom writing s.h.i.t.t.y stories except you.
Where the h.e.l.l is the formatting?
You should feel bad that this story is bad enough to make me puke, because I have a strong stomach. Tear this down, it's clogging the site and disgracing the Twilight series. When you've deleted it go drink some bleach so you can never write anything again.
| TheSimplestMelody chapter 27 . 7/23/2008
| littleSinsandSadlines chapter 27 . 7/22/2008
it's over? sad! you should totlayy have when kat ang haiden turn into vamps in your sequel!
| Ladyroo88 chapter 27 . 7/22/2008
I love it! if you could write a sequel that would be awesome!