Reviews for A New Yet Similar Path
SquadA chapter 11 . 8/16
Dude...loved it! The parts with ino and Sakura
The parts with Sasuke...
Even the battle with pro orochimaru was hilarious
But this also leaves many unanswered questions
What will happen to Sasuke will he lose control? Or will his friendship with naruto save him!
Also what about Hinata? Does she still love naruto
Does she even exist in this time frame?
Now that that's through...
Dude if you need help with ideas just ask in the reviews
We all will be willing to give you some helpful advise.
Plus we just all want to see another chapter in this epic fanfiction. Too many epic fan fictions have ended abruptly like this. I know you don't feel like you come back From a 2 year hiatus believe me you can. We have all been patiently waiting for too long. don't give up! No matter what challenges you face in life never give up! If nothing else at least give this fanfiction the best ending you could ever write!
P.S. After reading another fanfic I got kind of an idea I "borrowed." If you feel the need to get some time to think of the next story try to make some sort of filler. Like a date with sakura perhaps or maybe ino. Or maybe haku? You never know.
;)
AFriend chapter 11 . 8/15
Dude...loved it! The parts with ino and Sakura
The parts with Sasuke...
Even the battle with pro chimaera was hilarious
But this also leaves many unanswered questions
What will happen to Sasuke will he lose control? Or will his friendship with naruto save him!
Also what about Hinata? Does she still love naruto
Does she even exist in this time frame?
Now that that's through...
Dude if you need help with ideas just ask in the reviews
We all will be willing to give you some helpful advise.
Plus we just all want to see another chapter in this epic fanfiction. Too many epic fan fictions have ended abruptly like this. I know you don't feel like you come back From a 2 year hiatus believe me you can. We have all been patiently waiting for too long. don't give up! No matter what challenges you face in life never give up! If nothing else at least give this fanfiction the best ending you could ever write!
P.S. After reading another fanfic I got kind of an idea I "borrowed." If you feel the need to get some time to think of the next story try to make some sort of filler. Like a date with sakura perhaps or maybe ino. Or maybe haku? You never know...
SquadA chapter 11 . 8/15
Dude...loved it! The parts with ino and Sakura
The parts with Sasuke...
Even the battle with pro chimaera was hilarious
But this also leaves many unanswered questions
What will happen to Sasuke will he lose control? Or will his friendship with naruto save him!
Also what about Hinata? Does she still love naruto
Does she even exist in this time frame?
Now that that's through...
Dude if you need help with ideas just ask in the reviews
We all will be willing to give you some helpful advise.
Plus we just all want to see another chapter in this epic fanfiction. Too many epic fan fictions have ended abruptly like this. I know you don't feel like you come back From a 2 year hiatus believe me you can. We have all been patiently waiting for too long. don't give up! No matter what challenges you face in life never give up! If nothing else at least give this fanfiction the best ending you could ever write!
P.S. After reading another fanfic I got kind of an idea I "borrowed." If you feel the need to get some time to think of the next story try to make some sort of filler. Like a date with sakura perhaps or maybe ino. Or maybe haku? You never know.
Reviver chapter 11 . 8/15
Dude this series is so epic! With all the tensions and excitement... I love it!
Will Ino and Sakura fight for Naruto' love?
What will happen to Sasuke? Will he stay or leave?
Also what about Hinata? Does she still have a crush on naruto? Or will here be another person?
Things like this is why you should continue.
If you have writer's block or something just do what almost every anime does,and make a filler chapter while you think of new ideas. But just don't give up on this story. To be truthful when I first came upon it I wasn't expecting to be impressed, but guess what I was. I don't have the writing skills that you have you my friend are truly gifted. So please don't let us down. There are too many unfinished AWESOME fanfictions out there. Don't let your story be like that. Also don't think that people have lost interest. There are still a loyal band of readers waiting so don't let us down! You can do it BELIVE IT!

( I know, I know, but I couldn't resist it... Ya know!?)
Jose19 chapter 2 . 8/4
The thing you said about Kushina is false she is listed as dead by the Narutowikia, and there is no coming back at all after this but I am surprised that you have Sakura with Naruto being one of the worst pairings among any of the girls.
carloletsgo chapter 11 . 4/26
UPDATEEEEE!
Zabon95 chapter 10 . 4/6
I have not read this chapter yet but as a comment on how you said that it felt like people didn't want to read this fic anymore.
This is a top class fic, I've read 1000 fanfics, and this is one of the better ones! :D
agnar chapter 7 . 3/18
Well, the transfer thing was... kinda bullshit. I know the fic is long abandoned, but if you ever take it up again, fix this part, it fucks your whole fic up.

You declared Kyuubi had ONE TAIL left, and it was going into Naruto over a months time. Even if the entire fucking tail went at once, it wouldn't cause the kind of destruction you showed here. Naruto sure as fuck was never at 'bridge turning to dust' levels when he pulled out one tail.

Honestly I just think it was horribly overblown.

Also gotta say, I'm annoyed when things change from canon without explanation. Why did cheapskate Gato suddenly hire a dozen or so extra ninja? Because of Naruto? Doubtful, the guy already thought his 800 bandits/thugs would be enough to take on the canon ninja involved. Just don't see him hiring a shitload of extra missing nin because one of the genin *may* be tougher.

If Naruto had seriously wounded/killed Zabuza, then yeah I can see it.

Also the bit with Kushina, why did she decide to kill Gato and his men *this* time when last time she did nothing?
zero16132 chapter 11 . 3/1
Please update this story! It's so beautiful
Illuviar chapter 11 . 2/11
Great story! Any chance for an update after all those years?
miguce chapter 11 . 1/30
enjoyable read.. good time travel
Zeus501 chapter 7 . 1/17
ummmmmmmmmm...y havent u updated in like 3 years?
LisayaTomago chapter 3 . 12/26/2014
Okay. I made it through the first few chapters based on the plot, but coming to the third, I can't bring myself to read anymore. This may be a bit harsh, but a few characters are out of character. For example, Hiruzen wouldn't believe Naruto quite that easily. And while I know Naruto is powerful, this is a complete overkill. Honestly, his older consciousness in his younger body would've already made him quite powerful. Reading a few other reviews, I agree that you give Naruto all his power-ups on a silver platter, no work required based on what happened with the Kyuubi. And to have him look like Minato? You wrote before that he would look somewhere in between his older and younger self yet when he actually does travel back in time, he looks like a carbon copy of Minato, who is older than he ever was, completely contradicting yourself.
To look at the merits, your vocabulary is good though your punctuation when it comes to speech marks is lacking. There should always be a ,/./!/?/- before the closing speech mark, and this makes it difficult to read. Like I said, the plot is driving it, though it could do with more complexity.
I'm sorry, but I'm not going to read any further. I feel it would leave me more angered than satisfied. I hope my feedback can help you improve (if you're even reading this).
Guest chapter 11 . 10/9/2014
Where is the rest it's so good
Hey chapter 1 . 8/19/2014
It's a ducking narusaku fuck YOU
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