|Reviews for Broken Dream|
| Alexiel974 chapter 1 . 4/7/2010
You know what ? I did it ! I read this fantastic fic again...
And I still love it SO much ! It's a huge, huge story... Definitly one of my favorite !
Every moment of the fic, and even if I know the end, I fear for Ronon... *Come on, Ronon ! Will you understand that this world is a fake !* was my mantra all along the first part !
I loved every part of it, so thank you again !
| domina tempore chapter 21 . 3/6/2009
Oh, this was PERFECT! It was too bad that the fake one was fake; because in the beginning they were perfect too but the real one was even BETTER! :-) This is just what I needed.
| Gurkblomma chapter 21 . 1/25/2009
A really good story and I think that you have captured Ronon in a great way. Way to go!
| TubaPrincess chapter 21 . 1/23/2009
This is such a wonderful story! I love the ending :) It's so sweet and romantic. I'm so glad it has a happy ending! Yay! And.. it's true, it's so obvious those two couples.. hehe :)
| Alexiel974 chapter 21 . 1/21/2009
Yes, that’s a great “happy ever after” …
What is to say about this chapter ? just a word : PERFECT !
I love the way you introduce some Elizabeth&John and Rodney is so Rodney… The scene at the mess is wonderful, I loved to have the team back together and, above all, I love the way you wrote Teyla and Ronon as a couple. I have just a little criticism to make (yeah, I finally got one!) When Ronon says “Just like Sateda Teyla, but this is real. And a thousand times better.” This sentence (the first one) bothered me a little, I mean, he can’t compare the woman he loves with this false, dangerous and finally horrible woman (?) he saw in his dreams, can he ? Teyla IS unique and no one can compare to her (in Ronon mind). But it's not really important, this story is SO amazing that this is just a detail...
I hardly realize that you started to post this story almost 6 months ago and that I started to follow it since a little less… Time goes so fast when you enjoy things, doesn’t it ?
I took a great pleasure to read every chapter of this story (and to write some reviews)… I’ve got some funny memories about me reading it everywhere I could because I couldn’t wait to be at home ! (hahaha)… Now that it’s over, I already know I will miss the almost-weekly-update… And I think, I will re-read the whole story with the same pleasure once in a while.
Thank you a million for this huge story, and for your kindness. I hope reading another one from you soon (’cause you will write another great Atlantis story, one day, won’t you?)
| TheWelcomeStranger chapter 21 . 1/20/2009
Beautiful. Thankyou for the lovely ending. Made me smile :)
| Alexiel974 chapter 20 . 1/14/2009
OMG, let me take some Kleenex before I write my review….
The end of this chapter is SO stirring… Poor Ronon, being forced to kill the woman he loves… that's so sad… (Well, I'm so sad to have been right about that.)
The fight between Ronon and the Quitari was… OMG…
One more chapter (a nice one ? )… I don't want the fic to stop, but I SO want to read their "happy forever" (because they gonna be, hum?)
Once more, thank you for this wonderful story…
| Alexiel974 chapter 19 . 1/9/2009
YES YES YES YES YES! (hum, does it show how much I'm happy?)
Yes, Ronon, you two were really that obvious !
Well I'm SO happy that they finally got together ! And this chapter is just a little wonder.. I just can't help but keep on smiling all the time I was reading, and even now… It is so sweet, so well written…
I was scared about Ronon being forced to killed the false Teyla… but How could he do something like that ?
| TubaPrincess chapter 19 . 1/9/2009
I was wondering if that time would come. And, yes, they are totally and completely obvious to everyone. ..especially if Rodney notices. John is trained to take notice of things, but Rodney? Uh... no. Great chapter! I'm eager to read the next one :)
| Alexiel974 chapter 18 . 1/4/2009
Why hadn’t the dreams ended when Ronon killed Shep ? What could end it ? Will Ronon have to kill someone else… maybe Teyla (well, the false one) ?… That would be SO hard for him…
I can't wait to read the three last chapters… I'm in such a hurry to see how you will end that huge story (and in the mean time, I'm little sad to know that it is almost finished… )
I wish you a happy new year too, and the best for you and the ones you love.
| TubaPrincess chapter 18 . 1/3/2009
That didn't end it? That's awful! I wonder what will. I'm definitely still intrigued :)
| Alexiel974 chapter 17 . 12/28/2008
What can I say about this new chapter ?
I simply LOVE it... my favourite one so far... (isn't it quite normal ?)
I just love the way Ronon tells Teyla that he loves her. And the way she reacts...
I love the moment at the cafeteria ...
I love that moment between John and Elisabeth in her office
My God, I just love the entire chapter... I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how Ronon will finally end his dream and how the characters in his dream are going to react...
Thank you SO much for this chapter... it has been a nice Christmas present... I hope having the next one for the New Year's Eve.
| TubaPrincess chapter 17 . 12/22/2008
Aww.. that was so cute! I love all the T/R interaction now that he's made a decision :) And E/J! yay! That was so inventive.. I love "would you rather"s. I was actually thinking that this would be the last chapter, but I guess you have to show the other reality being defeated. I'm looking forward to what comes next! Thanks for the fluffy chapter!
| TubaPrincess chapter 16 . 12/19/2008
Interesting.. John seemed a bit off for being drunk. I'm glad Ronon noticed. So.. it seems like he's thinking that Atlantis is the real home. I'm glad he didn't actually spill that to John. Great chapter! I hope you're having fun holidays!
| Alexiel974 chapter 16 . 12/17/2008
Sorry for reviewing this chapter SO late, but as you said to me, life has been crazy these last days… So much work to do… But, as usual, I love taking a few minutes to read your fic… I love it SO much. Thank you for writing it… I just can't wait to see how Ronon is gonna discover (decide?) which life is the real one! It sound to me like things are going sometimes clearer in his mind, and just the moment after… more confusing… I was shocked by Teyla's behaviour when she return on Sateda… I mean, he is alive, so does she, she could be a little more enthusiastic… So, I'm in a hurry to read about when Teyla and Ronon will be back together after work on Sateda… And I want to read some more about Ronon on Atlantis… God… I want to read the next chapter of your fic…